Rambling Poetry

Poetry is tangerine and other potent or poisonous colors.
It is the breath you feel at the nape of your neck and
the strong caress of flesh on flesh, defying death.
It is most certainly Spring with petal flutters and jays
flittering about. Melodies come alive…words almost too
ravishing to versify…like brilliant diamonds and crystal lines.

Poetry is rhyme and not…it is time well spent. The clock
doesn’t give a hoot. It’s cuckoo to stand on your head
to get just the right angle, the geometric high. Likewise,
the adjustment on a thin wire, with ink blots to examine.
But a poet does, again and again, pounding at raw meat,
to settle a matter…but we never settle…there is always
one thing more. Death, maturity, seasonals. Let’s dig

up that grave. First we jump in, holding onto leaves dyed
in various tinctures. Often we swing over, on our trapeze,
thinking we are invincible - we don’t see the six foot ravine.
Not feeling trapped at all, until the Ice Queen shows up.

We paint that buttercup white, as if it were virtuous.
She vividly holds up the scales to weigh our slights,
to slow us down…now,
we dribble upon the page…drivelling every nuance, as if
our kids (our words) were leaving home and we need to drill
just one more thing. Sadly our words will hang
and slowly scroll away…our scribbles fondly remembered 
by a few for a while (and our smile)

Paint giraffes ouside the line, and gaffes - keep them in time.
Don’t be afraid to annunciate or not…to be literate or
alliterative…to be silly…oh do be silly…to be human…
to be common or uncommon…we all have our place.

We are the apostrophes, colons and periods. We stop
in mid-sentence a lot. We throw the hammer down
with an exclamation point or dot. We write run ons
or put out briefs. We admire awe. This is just a small
treatise of thought…a mud pie, but certainly not
a prize…but I say, the prize is in the beholder’s stall.

3/13/2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/17/2023 2:23:00 AM
"Don’t be afraid to annunciate or not…to be literate or alliterative…to be silly…oh do be silly…to be human… to be common or uncommon…we all have our place." Love your musings on poetry. It has so much scope as you rightly portray ! Wonderful poem dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2023 6:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Valsa!
Date: 3/17/2023 1:15:00 AM
We are all poets and a slight difference in something we see everyday brings s poem to our minds and our brain mulls it over until we are happy with our write and then we post it "but I say the prize is in the beholders stall" great poetic thoughts you put across here Kim so well created . Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2023 6:16:00 AM
Thank you, dear one!
Date: 3/16/2023 11:03:00 AM
Yes, poetry can come from most anything imaginable. I enjoyed reading this one. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2023 7:34:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Date: 3/16/2023 8:50:00 AM
Poetry is language divine, my dearest Kim. Your many fine verses are living proof of it. Be blessed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2023 7:34:00 PM
Blessings, dear one!
Date: 3/16/2023 5:01:00 AM
Very well said! I love the truth that resonates in the last lines. Blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2023 7:41:00 AM
Thank you, JCB!
Date: 3/15/2023 7:37:00 PM
Is there anything that poetry is not?! I'm thinking out loud here... It is not government! ~ Silly me
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2023 7:40:00 AM
LOL! Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 3/15/2023 2:42:00 AM
" It’s cuckoo to stand on your head to get just the right angle, the geometric high." "But a poet does, again and again, pounding at raw meat, to settle a matter…" Too many fine lines to note them all without repeating the entire poem. Your work speaks a tapestry of inspiration. That is greatness. Wonderful writing! Wise and beautiful. A FAVE!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/15/2023 8:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Joe!
Date: 3/14/2023 7:11:00 AM
I'm trying to imagine the mood your were in, when writing this one amazing ramble. Love it. harry
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2023 9:12:00 AM
Thank you, Harry :)
Date: 3/14/2023 5:01:00 AM
- So much truth in this writing, Kim - We who have the pleasure of reading poetry will appreciate a beautiful work ... "our scribbles fondly remembered by a few for a while" ... (true) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2023 9:12:00 AM
Yes! Hugs, my friend!
Date: 3/14/2023 2:12:00 AM
I love your ramble. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2023 4:00:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 3/13/2023 6:36:00 PM
You have written us all what is very true. And I deeply appreciate reading what you gave us. Splendid write, Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2023 4:01:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Fin!
Date: 3/13/2023 4:49:00 PM
Yes poets are a lot more free. There are more words for us to use than colors for an artist or actors and scenes for a film maker, types of clay or stone for a sculptor. The materials of our trade are quite limitless. Your poem exceeds the bounds of grammar and punctuation. Well done Kim. I enjoyed this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2023 4:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Wendy!
Date: 3/13/2023 2:34:00 PM
Love the paint giraffes stanza.....and as any well bred four year old will tell you..."the making of a mud pie is an art" so plunge in, splatter and create. Great write Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2023 3:55:00 PM
Thank you, John! You made me smile :)
Date: 3/13/2023 11:04:00 AM
Well, Kim, I believe I will "prize" this piece and put it carefully away in my "stall". It is an excellent tribute to poetry and the poets who work so hard and diligently to craft them into something even halfway meaningful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2023 12:37:00 PM
Thank you very much :)
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