Ram Reincarnated-W

In this life I have seen beauty
With its majesty and cruelty.
I believe in reincarnation doctrine
Would like to be butterfly divine.

A pure beauty of rainbow colors
Not as civilized as men who prefers
To have half of the happiness
And the longevity much in excess.

Would count moments not years
Flirting freely around without fears
Fire is beautiful its beauty kills
Care not if at all its beauty thrills.

Better to burn up for the beauty
Than long bored life without a cutie.  


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Dr. Ram Mehta
Second Place win in:
Contest: If I was an Animal, What Would I be sponsored by Kristen bruni

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/26/2011 5:14:00 PM
LOL ahhh we long for our mis spent youth! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/23/2011 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2011 12:05:00 PM
Beautiful, Dr Ram. Many conrats on both your wins : )
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Date: 5/21/2011 7:52:00 AM
wonderful, Dr. Ram :) Congratulation.
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Date: 5/21/2011 3:05:00 AM
Big congrats to you on this big win! x
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Date: 5/20/2011 9:55:00 PM
congrats on an awesome win with this unique poem, my friend!!
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Date: 5/20/2011 8:39:00 PM
Yes I so agree with you. This is a beautiful write Dr. Ram. Heartiest congrats for this win.
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Date: 5/20/2011 6:20:00 PM
Congratulations Dr.Mehta on your big win in the contest.Wonderful poem.
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Date: 5/20/2011 5:26:00 PM
Congratulations on you big win, your poem is just divine~
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Date: 5/20/2011 3:13:00 PM
you're a butterfly too like me, dr ram.... big cheers for your high spot.:) huggs
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Date: 5/20/2011 3:00:00 PM
Ha ha on the last line. I love butterflies, doc. The first of the season here in OHio are probably the white sulphurs...they flit and flutter around even when there is frost-yes their beauty thrills. Best to you with this awesome win. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/20/2011 2:09:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your great win in the animal contest ..an awesome piece my friend.. enjoy second spot..luv..
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Date: 5/20/2011 2:06:00 PM
Dear Dr. Ram, so happy to see you placing high in this contest. Well-deserved recognition for a wonderful poem. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/20/2011 1:54:00 PM
butterflies are great, congrats on your win. cory
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Date: 5/7/2011 8:35:00 AM
An intriguing write, Dr. Ram. A life by metamorphisis into a beautiful, carefree butterfly. Prompted for me to glance at Rama. I read the tale of Hanuman. It was clever, but not as vibrant as your work. Wishing you and yours the best!! Mikki
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Date: 5/6/2011 7:17:00 PM
This is really SWEET, Dr. Ram. WHo would have thunk it?? YOu as a butterfly. So original!!
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Date: 5/6/2011 6:09:00 PM
Interesting write! Good luck in the contest! Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 5/6/2011 6:03:00 PM
Great verse Dr Ram if flows nicely too like the grub and butterfly do next time i'm a clam :) see you mate Don
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Date: 5/6/2011 4:56:00 PM
PS - I think you know I also believe in reincarnation. Adding this to my faves.
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Date: 5/6/2011 4:55:00 PM
Bravo, Dr. Ram. Clever approach using reincarnation to introduce your "butterfly" alter ego. The last two lines are priceless! Best wishes in Kristen's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/6/2011 3:04:00 PM
Another superior write Dr. Ram.. and I agree with your first stanza very much luv.. and butterflies are so free and beautiful .. u would be king monarch one... good luck in the contest ..u have soup mail ...
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