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Ram Reincarnated-W

In this life I have seen beauty With its majesty and cruelty. I believe in reincarnation doctrine Would like to be butterfly divine. A pure beauty of rainbow colors Not as civilized as men who prefers To have half of the happiness And the longevity much in excess. Would count moments not years Flirting freely around without fears Fire is beautiful its beauty kills Care not if at all its beauty thrills. Better to burn up for the beauty Than long bored life without a cutie. ================================= Dr. Ram Mehta Second Place win in: Contest: If I was an Animal, What Would I be sponsored by Kristen bruni

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/26/2011 5:14:00 PM

LOL ahhh we long for our mis spent youth! Congrad's Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2011 7:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 5/21/2011 12:05:00 PM

Beautiful, Dr Ram. Many conrats on both your wins : )

Dinda Minardi

Date: 5/21/2011 7:52:00 AM

wonderful, Dr. Ram :) Congratulation.

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 5/21/2011 3:05:00 AM

Big congrats to you on this big win! x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2011 9:55:00 PM

congrats on an awesome win with this unique poem, my friend!!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/20/2011 8:39:00 PM

Yes I so agree with you. This is a beautiful write Dr. Ram. Heartiest congrats for this win.

Kash Poet

Date: 5/20/2011 6:20:00 PM

Congratulations Dr.Mehta on your big win in the contest.Wonderful poem.

Constance La France

Date: 5/20/2011 5:26:00 PM

Congratulations on you big win, your poem is just divine~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/20/2011 3:13:00 PM

you're a butterfly too like me, dr ram.... big cheers for your high spot.:) huggs

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/20/2011 3:00:00 PM

Ha ha on the last line. I love butterflies, doc. The first of the season here in OHio are probably the white sulphurs...they flit and flutter around even when there is frost-yes their beauty thrills. Best to you with this awesome win. Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/20/2011 2:09:00 PM

Congrats Dr. Ram on your great win in the animal contest ..an awesome piece my friend.. enjoy second spot..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2011 2:06:00 PM

Dear Dr. Ram, so happy to see you placing high in this contest. Well-deserved recognition for a wonderful poem. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Cory Long

Date: 5/20/2011 1:54:00 PM

butterflies are great, congrats on your win. cory

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/7/2011 8:35:00 AM

An intriguing write, Dr. Ram. A life by metamorphisis into a beautiful, carefree butterfly. Prompted for me to glance at Rama. I read the tale of Hanuman. It was clever, but not as vibrant as your work. Wishing you and yours the best!! Mikki

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2011 7:17:00 PM

This is really SWEET, Dr. Ram. WHo would have thunk it?? YOu as a butterfly. So original!!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/6/2011 6:09:00 PM

Interesting write! Good luck in the contest! Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Caroline.

Don Johnson

Date: 5/6/2011 6:03:00 PM

Great verse Dr Ram if flows nicely too like the grub and butterfly do next time i'm a clam :) see you mate Don

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/6/2011 4:56:00 PM

PS - I think you know I also believe in reincarnation. Adding this to my faves.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/6/2011 4:55:00 PM

Bravo, Dr. Ram. Clever approach using reincarnation to introduce your "butterfly" alter ego. The last two lines are priceless! Best wishes in Kristen's contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/6/2011 3:04:00 PM

Another superior write Dr. Ram.. and I agree with your first stanza very much luv.. and butterflies are so free and beautiful .. u would be king monarch one... good luck in the contest ..u have soup mail ...