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Rakin' Songs

I hear my sister calling me for dinner As I'm raking up the clippings from the grass. I turn my head And am stuck by the gently setting sun That glows red through the soft grey clouds. A light breeze plays with my hair As this warm summer evening crawls to a close. I inhale. "Coming!"

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Date: 1/22/2024 5:44:00 PM
Nicely done! A lovely image I can imagine!
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