Rakin' Songs

I hear my sister calling me for dinner
As I'm raking up the clippings from the grass.
I turn my head
And am stuck by the gently setting sun
That glows red through the soft grey clouds.
A light breeze plays with my hair
As this warm summer evening crawls to a close.

I inhale.

"Coming!"
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Rodrigues Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 5:44 PM
Nicely done! A lovely image I can imagine!
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