Raisin Bran

They named their baby Brad to be grand But with a typo it came out Bran How's that for luck But then it stuck Now they're raisin Bran I understand

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/11/2017 8:51:00 AM

Oh this is so cute. It made me smile. have a nice day my friend.

Pat Adams
Date: 10/11/2017 5:23:00 PM

Thank you so much! Have a nice back at ya!!.....80)

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/25/2017 8:08:00 AM

:-)

Pat Adams
Date: 9/25/2017 8:22:00 AM

Thank you J.................P

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 9/23/2017 6:52:00 PM

Lol; and I betcha he never has trouble going!~Che :)

Pat Adams
Date: 9/24/2017 7:32:00 AM

Thank you so much. Especially nice from a seasoned limerick writer such as yourself!.............80)

Lin Lane

Date: 9/23/2017 2:03:00 PM

pshawww... a darn funny limerick, Pat.

Pat Adams
Date: 9/23/2017 3:54:00 PM

Well shucks (kicking ground with toe) That's mighty neighborly of ya Lin!! Say hi to Lois for me will ya? (I always wanted to say that!).............80)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2017 11:54:00 AM

ha ha ha great one Pat:-) hugs jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 9/23/2017 3:52:00 PM

Thanks Jan. I'm going to be so behind on reading poems by Monday morning. So many poems so little time!! I'll catch up, well in a manner of speaking! (writing?).............80)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/23/2017 9:41:00 AM

Lol awesome :) !

Pat Adams
Date: 9/24/2017 7:31:00 AM

Glad you liked it........80)

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 9/23/2017 8:55:00 AM

BA DOOP PSSHHHHHHHHHH!!

Pat Adams
Date: 9/23/2017 3:47:00 PM

Ha!.........Answering comments right now but back to work soon. Work, sleep, work, sleep. Gotta buy the notebooks and pens with something I guess......80)