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Rainy Night's Walk

A rainy night's walk: the street lights are gleaming a dream's fluorescence in obsidian sky. Halogen wishes are far away beaming illumined teardrops that I refuse to cry. All windows are dark, their silence is screaming. Ebony trees are stiff guardians nearby. The sidewalk in charcoal is colder than rock, my constant companion on this midnight walk. Low raven hedges are barriers of leaf, marking the boundaries of family pride. Lattices of flowers shield lifetimes of grief, the shadowy bars that keep secrets inside. My house is one lighted; it's my true belief that yellows and peaches push sadness aside. I see my porch light in distant resplendence, a shining white angel's bright incandescence. 9th Place Form R Contest 7/7/17

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Date: 7/11/2017 10:00:00 AM
Wow! The ending was perfect, sounds like home, sweet home, in spite of the sadness:)
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Date: 7/7/2017 1:54:00 PM
This is beautiful. I felt myself on a path to a safe home. Very well done. A favorite :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/7/2017 2:02:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi, that means a lot!
Date: 7/7/2017 12:20:00 PM
I echo what Maureen said...beautiful. This has a glowing cosmic feel to it that enchants as it guides you through the storyline. Really nicely done my friend.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/7/2017 12:23:00 PM
Thanks, Chris, glad you like it!
Date: 7/7/2017 11:18:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/7/2017 11:22:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen, for stopping by!

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