Rainy Days

Begrudgingly I grab my raincoat rolling my eyes back sighing, not again
Now SHE, she jumps up and down acting like she just won the lottery.
Slipping on rubber boots I ask, you really want to walk in this rain?
She stares at me as if saying, move it I don’t have all day.

Opening the front door the strong wind sprays rain into my face
I grab my zipper pulling it up as high as I can get it.
My loud cries were drowned out by the wind of course 
As my saggy aging chin got in the way of zips journey to the top.

Wondering which direction we should go this time out
I am dragged quickly to the right for some reason only she knows
Before long I am pulled under the first tree, a wind gust comes up
Dumping water on me as if this were the ice bucket challenge.

Now if the neighbours are wondering where my umbrella is
Yesterday it tried taking me on an outer space mission.
It was one of those super heavy duty cost a fortune type
Built so well, instead of collapsing you just fly.

When I decided she had enough opportunities for release 
It becomes my turn to do the pulling and I’m all in.
She slowly came still kicking grass wildly behind her,
Sending little patches of grass flying on the neighbour’s lawn. Ops.

Entering my house I am happy to shed a few pounds of soaked laundry 
I dry her off as well as possible then she shakes and soaks the front hall.
Pondering the fresh air and exercise I just received I sit back in my chair
Happy and contented, praying she can hold it till the rain finally stops.

For ye whom wonder, yes I had baggies with me.

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans
09.11.2014
For Contest Rainy Days
4th
Leonora Galinta

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/11/2014 2:49:00 PM
Very entertaining write, Brenda!! Children and pets can't be denied, can they! We make sacrifices...but then, it's often a pleasure to do so. Congrats on another fine win. Hope you're having a lovely weekend...without rain! // paul
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Date: 10/10/2014 3:17:00 PM
Hi Brenda, your poem was so well written with a lot of humor despite your annoyance with this rainy day venture. I thoroughly enjoyed it. What we do for kids and pets! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/10/2014 11:29:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this and congratulations on your win -JT
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Date: 10/10/2014 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations, dear Brenda, on a well-deserved win with this excellent piece! Very enjoyable witty write! pandita
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/10/2014 11:27:00 AM
Thank you Pandita
Date: 10/10/2014 9:12:00 AM
Oh, what a down to earth write. I love it and would have placed it higher. BG
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/10/2014 10:38:00 AM
Thanks for your sweet kind comment Barbara.
Date: 10/10/2014 9:01:00 AM
Enjoyed your description. Congrats.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/10/2014 10:37:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 10/10/2014 8:44:00 AM
- I enjoy reading your lovely and well written poem, Brenda ! - Congratulations on your 4rd place in the contest! - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/10/2014 10:36:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise
Date: 10/10/2014 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write. Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/10/2014 10:35:00 AM
Thank you Leonora for my placing.
Date: 10/10/2014 6:40:00 AM
Enjoyable story, Brenda, congrats on the win
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/10/2014 10:34:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 10/10/2014 5:50:00 AM
Been there, done that. Good story! Congratulations! Cheers, Roy
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/10/2014 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Roy.
Date: 10/10/2014 4:59:00 AM
am so sorry I missed this delightful write Brenda I sure am smiling now! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/10/2014 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 9/12/2014 9:32:00 AM
Delightful tale, shall I congratulate you now?
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/12/2014 10:11:00 AM
Glad you like It Richard.
Date: 9/12/2014 5:17:00 AM
excellent piece of writing
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/12/2014 7:20:00 AM
Thanks Liam.
Date: 9/12/2014 4:58:00 AM
Reads like a winner .Way to go for the contest.My tiny little Chihuahua sticks her nose out the doggie door and says you think I am going out there, turns around and goes uses the pads..Thanks for all the visits to my page.The Haiku about the Jack Russell is a true story.There is a black panther being spotted in our area West Central Georgia USA.It has been caught on videos that people have out on their deer plots.The dog was barking in the night and they let it out and have not seen it since.SK
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/12/2014 7:19:00 AM
Oh how terrible. The way you wrote it still makes one snicker.
Date: 9/11/2014 11:42:00 AM
Wonderful expressions on a rainy day, Brenda
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