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Rainy

As it falls I see the mist from splattered drops bouncing off of the rooftops flooding streets and flowing free sometimes I wish those drops were me a life seemingly short but go's on and on and on recycled drops of water that are never really gone an adventure every time they are released out of the sky falling toward the earth, pretending they can fly and when they hit the earth they will feel no sort of pain and they'll jump right back in line eager to take the fall again.

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Date: 6/25/2014 5:56:00 PM
Well done Eric..a little different for you but very good...Tim
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Eric Schojan
Date: 6/25/2014 6:23:00 PM
Thank you soo much Tim, sorry for the lack of answers and comments, I have been crazy stretched with a new job :) so glad you still read my work, it really means a lot
Date: 6/25/2014 4:51:00 PM
Wow great perspective, I will think of you every time it rains, actually it is just starting to rain here, I like this a lot Eric, hugs :)
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Eric Schojan
Date: 6/25/2014 6:25:00 PM
CASARAH!!!! my favorite person on poetrysoup!! :) sorry I havent been answering like I want to, I've been crazy busy, gettin ready to move, thank you for still supporting me so much :) you are the best!

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