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Rainsticks and Drums Native Chants and Pagan Dreams, remastered

Amazon mist and rainy mornings green as the day God made them dropping from a moist sky full of even grays and sheltering light peaceful music playing from the spheres of a dense forest dream we are all little humans in a big big giant cave, .... the rain Pitter patter drops on thirsty tree in a world that is evened once again sheets of rain fall from my window and I click click click and glean a slow memory of old, photographs of mom and dad inside the garden we were small and happily drinking in the scene .... the rain A Sentinel watches from a soldiering evergreen, I lived there before the white washed walls of peace and the age old chanterelle dance as raindrops settle in my soul, I compose a poem about the downpour. Petrichor scents permeate my living space as I listen to ... the rain Rainsticks and drums Native chants and Pagan dreams of old, I remember, Lady Gianne and her healing chants, how she lifted her face to the winds. "Heal me now and make me whole" * " Bring peace and love forevermore" As nature creates pathways to equity, the rain loves US, again and again and again. .... the rain.

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Date: 10/19/2024 12:18:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem Rose, I'm reading this as the rain is falling in London.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/19/2024 2:53:00 PM
London England or London Ontario ?
Date: 10/19/2024 10:59:00 AM
Dear sweet rose, healing is a long but satisfying journey, and this is such a touching and soulful ode to the rain! I especially felt the lines “Heal me now and make me whole" * " Bring peace and love forevermore" I hope and pray that rain brings you peace and love and all that you deserve, for you and for everyone! Pleasure always reading your heartfelt poems. Sending you light always
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Date: 10/19/2024 11:53:00 AM
Always a pleasure dipping in your commentary words of affection and appreciation Ink, hope your keeping well, happy weekend wherever you are !
Date: 10/19/2024 6:08:00 AM
I compose a poem about the downpour.. it seems you wrote whilst it was raining... or maybe its a metaphor... you are inspired by so many things around you... great poem dear Vie..
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Silent One
Date: 10/20/2024 1:00:00 AM
My sweet friend..I was quoting that line from your poem...although I do have downpour poems lol
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/19/2024 11:54:00 AM
I will go read your downpour poem if you tell me the title S,
Date: 10/19/2024 5:37:00 AM
You really went all out on this one. Never seen a tribute to the rain quite like this. Hope you have a wonderful weekend
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/19/2024 11:54:00 AM
So happy you liked it Tom, hope your keeping well . Happy Saturday :)
Date: 10/19/2024 5:22:00 AM
Without it mankind would perish, love the imagery of the Amazon Vie. I've done that with a few, as we write more we get better at it and tweak old writes. Tom
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Date: 10/19/2024 11:55:00 AM
Yes I wrote this one 2 years ago, just brushed it up a bit and reposted it, thanks for reading :)
Date: 10/19/2024 5:16:00 AM
What a beautiful and vivid reflection Vie. Your words capture the essence of nature's cycle so poetically—the rain as both a cleansing and unifying force, bringing peace and harmony to the world around us. A fave for me ...Hugs
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Date: 10/19/2024 11:55:00 AM
Rain is always cleansing and so invigorating too Maria, when we are in the right frame of mind of course. Thanks for reading and appreciating, love

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