Raining in Summer

I watch my verdant eyes  envious as the botanicals  blossom in a sandstone sunrise glow, 
I am a forlorn figure wandering in my fog of fears, 
I cannot omit my icy turbulent tears, 
Our short saga of passion much like the snow keeps me on the slippery slopes of sorrow, 
Unlike the spring my heart is wary of healing, 
I have tried to evolve like my  kin as their colours modify with the sky,   
But my reckless  resilience sits saturated in puddles of pity, 
I am perpetually a grey shadow lost in winter's chill, 

I sometimes ask the cotton candy clouds to glimmer their cedar joy upon my perils, 
Their intellectual gapes tell me I must find my internal self-love to glide with other stems again, 
I know you're the perilous storm I sowed, but I desire to leave behind our wilting tale. 
I wish to burn these bitter beads of pain, yet like the summer rain, I’m struggling to allow a fluorescent rainbow to shine its rays of hope. 
Instead, I wallow in the equinox between light and dark, 
I fill my petals with pesticides because they resemble you, I wait patiently for this period of despair to depart, as no emotion can linger eternally.

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Date: 6/10/2024 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations Sabrina on your win. Cheers.
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Date: 6/8/2024 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner in this contest. Way to go. I like the way you approached the theme. Keep on writing. Sara K
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Date: 6/5/2024 8:06:00 AM
Dear sabrina, me and my cousin ( partner in judging this contest) really loved this take on the prompt. The depth of emotions youv conveyed through deep metaphors and alliterations really hits strong! Theres so many brilliant lines in this especially the ending is powerful! Poignant and profound! Although theres few punctuations that can be fixed here, i still must highlight that you took the prompt to a whole different level! Thank you! For sharing. Congratulations on your 1st place win
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