Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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23.05.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Raining in Summer Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Ink Empress 

3rd place in the contest

- Raining in Summer -

                              - Summer rain is a passing moment ~
                             which will soon be pierced by sun rays -
                                                quote by poet 


                                      Merry sound of happiness
                                     a little rain satisfies the air
                                    The clouds are the shadows,
                                            after sunny days
                                            Aquarius is wise,
                                     nature painted in watercolor

                                        Countless lyrical drops
                                 crystals sprinkle in the flower bells
                                           Nobody would care,
                               neither bird, flowers nor teasing bees
                                     Can smell the wet substrate
                              and breathe pure thoughts everywhere

                                Collecting dripping drops in a jam jar
                                     with an apostle spoon in silver
                               Summer rain in triumphant symphony
                                      scattered through paradise
                                   With frugality and a lot of profit
                                       - until the soul is satisfied

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Tonye George June 10, 2024 at 11:32 AM Congratulations Anne on your win. Cheers.

Regina Elliott June 8, 2024 at 5:09 AM A big Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on this soulful summer rain beauty. Enjoy your June weekend. Blessings :)

Ink Empress June 8, 2024 at 12:23 AM Dear anne lise, wow thats a beautiful picture to go with your poem, so fitting. And i love the way youv written “Aquarius is wise, nature painted in watercolor” unique and creative lines. I love this poem although from my phone its difficult when judging to read because of the arrangement of words , i still love it. Thank you for supporting my contest. Its always good to read your interpretations dear anne lise congratulations on your win

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2024 at 3:51 PM Congrats on your winning poem. The picture with it is perfect

Sara Kendrick June 5, 2024 at 3:00 PM Ahh!! Like the animated photo and your work describing it. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith June 5, 2024 at 10:42 AM Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Raining in Summer" write/quote. What a great picture. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away With Your Win...........

Jennifer Proxenos May 30, 2024 at 11:34 AM I hear an orchestra as i read this life like poem and stunning pic. Your talent touches me deep within my soul and its beauty explodes in my heart, a truly magical write, Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Yann Rolland May 29, 2024 at 10:42 PM te rain, will never be the same, after reading you, you made a magical pom here, so beautiful and touching, thanks a lot yann

Sam Kauffman May 29, 2024 at 10:22 AM Anne-Lise, this literally is a "symphony" played by summer rain capturing its delight in sounds, scenes and scents! There is a perfume from summer rain that is so distinctive. You put me in that place! Best wishes for the contest! Hugs and blessings! Congratulations on your win in Kim's contest. Very fun with a poignant underlying truth!

Duke Beaufort May 27, 2024 at 6:12 PM Anne-Lise, this weaves together a lot of wonderful things about rain. You give it a bit of magic and make it seem like it is all part of a harmonious relationship that touches many facets of what we can perceive.

Mike Bayles May 26, 2024 at 9:14 AM I like the line, "a little rain satisfies the air."

Joseph P. DiMino May 25, 2024 at 12:43 PM Magical, transforming write. Love it!

Tonye George May 25, 2024 at 10:06 AM The last line" until the soul is satisfied." Lovely one Anne.

Victor Buhagiar May 25, 2024 at 3:15 AM I agree with Valsa. Summer rain clears the air, cleans the streets and relieves us of hot weather. Loved it.

Valsa George May 24, 2024 at 8:40 PM Summer rain is always a joy and comes sparingly. But as the climate has changed globally, here in Kerala- a small state where I live, there is torrential rain now in the peak of summer. A lovely poem. "Countless lyrical drops crystals sprinkle in the flower bells". Love these lines. All the Best dear Anne. Love and hugs!

Jay Narain May 24, 2024 at 11:19 AM Rain is always good for the garden and the environment. Nice poem and great picture. Do rain drops fall only vertically?

Frederic Parker May 24, 2024 at 9:13 AM Peaceful serene wondrous, your poem captures them all, dear poet

Daniel Henry Rodgers May 24, 2024 at 6:23 AM Dearest Anne-Lise, What a wonderful and serene picture of nature's beauty after a summer rain. The imagery of raindrops collecting in flower bells and the scent of wet earth evokes such a sense of tranquility and joy. I loved how your words dance with elegance and grace, capturing the essence of a moment in nature. An exquisite piece. - Blessings, Daniel

Hilda Greenhough May 23, 2024 at 8:48 PM Rain in a garden does great good. I enjoy this poem. Good luck with the contest.

Sotto Poet May 23, 2024 at 7:41 PM Anne-Lise your poem is a delight to read its eloquent descriptions and charming use of alliteration. The summer rain echoes in a joyous symphony.

Kim Rodrigues May 23, 2024 at 4:57 PM crystals sprinkle in the flower bells… Collecting dripping drops in a jam jar with an apostle spoon in silver…Love the prettiness of these lines, dear poet! Hugs ~ Kim Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2024 at 7:03 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Kim :) - hugs