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23.05.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Raining in Summer Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Ink Empress 

3rd place in the contest

- Summer rain is a passing moment ~ which will soon be pierced by sun rays - quote by poet Merry sound of happiness a little rain satisfies the air The clouds are the shadows, after sunny days Aquarius is wise, nature painted in watercolor Countless lyrical drops crystals sprinkle in the flower bells Nobody would care, neither bird, flowers nor teasing bees Can smell the wet substrate and breathe pure thoughts everywhere Collecting dripping drops in a jam jar with an apostle spoon in silver Summer rain in triumphant symphony scattered through paradise With frugality and a lot of profit - until the soul is satisfied

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Date: 6/10/2024 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations Anne on your win. Cheers.
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Date: 6/8/2024 5:09:00 AM
A big Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on this soulful summer rain beauty. Enjoy your June weekend. Blessings :)
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Date: 6/8/2024 12:23:00 AM
Dear anne lise, wow thats a beautiful picture to go with your poem, so fitting. And i love the way youv written “Aquarius is wise, nature painted in watercolor” unique and creative lines. I love this poem although from my phone its difficult when judging to read because of the arrangement of words , i still love it. Thank you for supporting my contest. Its always good to read your interpretations dear anne lise congratulations on your win
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Date: 6/7/2024 3:51:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem. The picture with it is perfect
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Date: 6/5/2024 3:00:00 PM
Ahh!! Like the animated photo and your work describing it. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
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Date: 6/5/2024 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Raining in Summer" write/quote. What a great picture. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away With Your Win...........
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Date: 5/30/2024 11:34:00 AM
I hear an orchestra as i read this life like poem and stunning pic. Your talent touches me deep within my soul and its beauty explodes in my heart, a truly magical write, Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/29/2024 10:42:00 PM
te rain, will never be the same, after reading you, you made a magical pom here, so beautiful and touching, thanks a lot yann
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Date: 5/29/2024 10:22:00 AM
Anne-Lise, this literally is a "symphony" played by summer rain capturing its delight in sounds, scenes and scents! There is a perfume from summer rain that is so distinctive. You put me in that place! Best wishes for the contest! Hugs and blessings! Congratulations on your win in Kim's contest. Very fun with a poignant underlying truth!
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Date: 5/27/2024 6:12:00 PM
Anne-Lise, this weaves together a lot of wonderful things about rain. You give it a bit of magic and make it seem like it is all part of a harmonious relationship that touches many facets of what we can perceive.
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Date: 5/26/2024 9:14:00 AM
I like the line, "a little rain satisfies the air."
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Date: 5/25/2024 12:43:00 PM
Magical, transforming write. Love it!
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Date: 5/25/2024 10:06:00 AM
The last line" until the soul is satisfied." Lovely one Anne.
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Date: 5/25/2024 3:15:00 AM
I agree with Valsa. Summer rain clears the air, cleans the streets and relieves us of hot weather. Loved it.
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Date: 5/24/2024 8:40:00 PM
Summer rain is always a joy and comes sparingly. But as the climate has changed globally, here in Kerala- a small state where I live, there is torrential rain now in the peak of summer. A lovely poem. "Countless lyrical drops crystals sprinkle in the flower bells". Love these lines. All the Best dear Anne. Love and hugs!
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Date: 5/24/2024 11:19:00 AM
Rain is always good for the garden and the environment. Nice poem and great picture. Do rain drops fall only vertically?
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Date: 5/24/2024 9:13:00 AM
Peaceful serene wondrous, your poem captures them all, dear poet
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Date: 5/24/2024 6:23:00 AM
Dearest Anne-Lise, What a wonderful and serene picture of nature's beauty after a summer rain. The imagery of raindrops collecting in flower bells and the scent of wet earth evokes such a sense of tranquility and joy. I loved how your words dance with elegance and grace, capturing the essence of a moment in nature. An exquisite piece. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/23/2024 8:48:00 PM
Rain in a garden does great good. I enjoy this poem. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 5/23/2024 7:41:00 PM
Anne-Lise your poem is a delight to read its eloquent descriptions and charming use of alliteration. The summer rain echoes in a joyous symphony.
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Date: 5/23/2024 5:48:00 PM
beautifully descriptive words and delightful alliterations make this poem a joy to read. I especially liked an apostle spoon in silver. Summer rain in triumphant symphony Your poem is exquisite and is one Ink will really like Best wishes with the contest. hugs, Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2024 7:05:00 AM
- Yes, 14 days of sunshine is almost unbelievable... when it starts to rain here, it never stops... I'm afraid that summer won't come back... many thanks for your comment, Sara :) - hugs
Date: 5/23/2024 4:57:00 PM
crystals sprinkle in the flower bells… Collecting dripping drops in a jam jar with an apostle spoon in silver…Love the prettiness of these lines, dear poet! Hugs ~ Kim
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2024 7:03:00 AM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Kim :) - hugs

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