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Raining in Summer

In skies of gray I dwell inside of clouds, keeping company with mugginess and sweltering heat. People who labor underneath me perspire profusely; some curse. Others pray for me to cut their labor short. Yes, they pray for rain. I hear their cries, for I’ve been mustering steam during days and days of dreadful drought. Pitter patter pitter patter Their plaintive pleas I answer teasingly. Starting slow. I dole out droplets drop by drop by tiny drop The droplets increase . . . plop plop plop. Wind joins in - wailing. Trees tremble as I splatter them with wonderful wetness for the prayerful. Swoosh! Ker-plunk! I’m drumming and drumming, pouring myself down on thirsting flowers with heads bowed to reverently receive me. Umbrellas appear all over the streets. Gleefully, I pound them, hammering away. I pounce on the heads of uncovered people. Soaking grass and soil, filling rain gutters, and sliding joyously off many hard surfaces, I saturate every place that I’m able to outside. I am rain, and unceasingly this summer day, I reign supreme.

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Date: 5/28/2024 12:09:00 AM
An excellent array of characters' POV and characterizations. Perfect for a children's book!
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Date: 5/22/2024 5:17:00 PM
Andrea, OMG....reign supreme. So cute and the perspective is wonderful.
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Date: 5/22/2024 5:07:00 PM
I liked your personification perspective in describing summer rain, Andrea. Nicely written!
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Date: 5/22/2024 6:23:00 AM
I love the sound of your rain pounding and hammering away on the umbrellas that appear all over the street! A fun and noisy poem…heehee! xxoo
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Date: 5/21/2024 9:24:00 PM
Ah, I can't wait for Summer rain! Beautiful poem-
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/21/2024 10:39:00 PM
Thanks, Paige
Date: 5/21/2024 4:39:00 PM
I enjoyed the personification of the summer rain. I especially liked "out droplets" because it was alliterative and created a delightful image.I also liked: they pray for rain. I hear their cries, for I’ve been mustering steam during days and days of dreadful drought. You painted wonderful images within both your metaphors and imagery. Excellent contest entry. Enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/21/2024 10:40:00 PM
Thanks so much. This was such an inspiring contest to me.
Date: 5/21/2024 12:44:00 PM
Andrea, your poem displays a high level of poetic brilliance through the use of excellent metaphors and imagery. Your ability to vividly paint a picture with words is a true testament to the beauty of poetry. The subtle use of alliteration adds an elegant touch to your work. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/21/2024 10:41:00 PM
Thanks, Sotto. You give such sweet comments to poets here
Date: 5/21/2024 11:06:00 AM
Nice summer rain poem. Good imagery and alliteration.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/21/2024 10:41:00 PM
Thanks, Jay
Date: 5/21/2024 10:02:00 AM
Your really painted a picture here with your words, which is the beauty of poetry.. nice light alliteration also.. Best of luck in the contest..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/21/2024 10:41:00 PM
Thanks, S.O
Date: 5/21/2024 3:55:00 AM
Tongue in the cheek, full of onomatopoetic allure, alliteration and imagery. Loved to read it. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/21/2024 10:42:00 PM
Thanks, Victor

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