Raining in Summer

In skies of gray I dwell
inside of clouds,
keeping company with mugginess
and sweltering heat.

People who labor underneath me
perspire profusely; some curse.
Others pray for me
to cut their labor short.

Yes, they pray for rain.
I hear their cries,
for I’ve been mustering steam
during days and days of dreadful drought.

Pitter  patter  pitter  patter
Their plaintive pleas I answer teasingly.
Starting slow. I dole out droplets 
 drop     by    drop      by  tiny   drop

The droplets increase . . . plop  plop  plop.
Wind joins in - wailing.
Trees tremble as I splatter them
with wonderful wetness for the prayerful.
Swoosh! Ker-plunk!  
I’m drumming and drumming, 
pouring myself down
on thirsting flowers with heads bowed
to reverently receive me.

Umbrellas appear all over the streets.
Gleefully, I pound them, hammering away.
I pounce on the heads of uncovered people.
Soaking grass and soil,
filling rain gutters, and 
sliding joyously off many hard surfaces,
I saturate every place that I’m able to outside.

I am rain, and unceasingly
this summer day, 
I reign
supreme.

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Date: 6/10/2024 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win. Cheers.
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Date: 6/6/2024 7:01:00 AM
Oh!! The joy of a summer rain. I enjoyed the descriptiveness of this winner. Way go to. Congratulations. Sara K
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Date: 6/6/2024 2:17:00 AM
Dear sweet andrea, this is like a personification of rain so well articulated and delivered! I especially love the ending! Thats powerful how you wrote “ I am rain, and unceasingly this summer day, I reign supreme” wow that ending left an impression! Iv noticed lately your poems have this very strong ending which leaves a long lasting impression! Pleasure reading this! Thank you for sharing and for supporting my contest! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/5/2024 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun rain write. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away With Your Win...........
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Date: 5/28/2024 12:09:00 AM
An excellent array of characters' POV and characterizations. Perfect for a children's book!
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Date: 5/22/2024 5:17:00 PM
Andrea, OMG....reign supreme. So cute and the perspective is wonderful.
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Date: 5/22/2024 5:07:00 PM
I liked your personification perspective in describing summer rain, Andrea. Nicely written!
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Date: 5/22/2024 6:23:00 AM
I love the sound of your rain pounding and hammering away on the umbrellas that appear all over the street! A fun and noisy poem…heehee! xxoo
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Date: 5/21/2024 9:24:00 PM
Ah, I can't wait for Summer rain! Beautiful poem-
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/21/2024 10:39:00 PM
Thanks, Paige
Date: 5/21/2024 12:44:00 PM
Andrea, your poem displays a high level of poetic brilliance through the use of excellent metaphors and imagery. Your ability to vividly paint a picture with words is a true testament to the beauty of poetry. The subtle use of alliteration adds an elegant touch to your work. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/21/2024 10:41:00 PM
Thanks, Sotto. You give such sweet comments to poets here
Date: 5/21/2024 11:06:00 AM
Nice summer rain poem. Good imagery and alliteration.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/21/2024 10:41:00 PM
Thanks, Jay
Date: 5/21/2024 10:02:00 AM
Your really painted a picture here with your words, which is the beauty of poetry.. nice light alliteration also.. Best of luck in the contest..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/21/2024 10:41:00 PM
Thanks, S.O
Date: 5/21/2024 3:55:00 AM
Tongue in the cheek, full of onomatopoetic allure, alliteration and imagery. Loved to read it. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/21/2024 10:42:00 PM
Thanks, Victor
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