Raining in Summer

In skies of gray I dwell
inside of clouds,
keeping company with mugginess
and sweltering heat.

People who labor underneath me
perspire profusely; some curse.
Others pray for me
to cut their labor short.

Yes, they pray for rain.
I hear their cries,
for I’ve been mustering steam
during days and days of dreadful drought.

Pitter  patter  pitter  patter
Their plaintive pleas I answer teasingly.
Starting slow. I dole out droplets 
 drop     by    drop      by  tiny   drop

The droplets increase . . . plop  plop  plop.
Wind joins in - wailing.
Trees tremble as I splatter them
with wonderful wetness for the prayerful.
Swoosh! Ker-plunk!  
I’m drumming and drumming, 
pouring myself down
on thirsting flowers with heads bowed
to reverently receive me.

Umbrellas appear all over the streets.
Gleefully, I pound them, hammering away.
I pounce on the heads of uncovered people.
Soaking grass and soil,
filling rain gutters, and 
sliding joyously off many hard surfaces,
I saturate every place that I’m able to outside.

I am rain, and unceasingly
this summer day, 
I reign
supreme.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win. Cheers.
Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 7:01 AM
Oh!! The joy of a summer rain. I enjoyed the descriptiveness of this winner. Way go to. Congratulations. Sara K
Empress Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 2:17 AM
Dear sweet andrea, this is like a personification of rain so well articulated and delivered! I especially love the ending! Thats powerful how you wrote “ I am rain, and unceasingly this summer day, I reign supreme” wow that ending left an impression! Iv noticed lately your poems have this very strong ending which leaves a long lasting impression! Pleasure reading this! Thank you for sharing and for supporting my contest! Congratulations on your win!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 10:13 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun rain write. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away With Your Win...........
Warlov Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 12:09 AM
An excellent array of characters' POV and characterizations. Perfect for a children's book!
Beaufort Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 5:17 PM
Andrea, OMG....reign supreme. So cute and the perspective is wonderful.
Leiser Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 5:07 PM
I liked your personification perspective in describing summer rain, Andrea. Nicely written!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 6:23 AM
I love the sound of your rain pounding and hammering away on the umbrellas that appear all over the street! A fun and noisy poem…heehee! xxoo
Hind Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 9:24 PM
Ah, I can't wait for Summer rain! Beautiful poem-
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 10:39 PM
Thanks, Paige
Poet Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 12:44 PM
Andrea, your poem displays a high level of poetic brilliance through the use of excellent metaphors and imagery. Your ability to vividly paint a picture with words is a true testament to the beauty of poetry. The subtle use of alliteration adds an elegant touch to your work. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 10:41 PM
Thanks, Sotto. You give such sweet comments to poets here
Narain Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 11:06 AM
Nice summer rain poem. Good imagery and alliteration.
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 10:41 PM
Thanks, Jay
One Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 10:02 AM
Your really painted a picture here with your words, which is the beauty of poetry.. nice light alliteration also.. Best of luck in the contest..
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 10:41 PM
Thanks, S.O
Buhagiar Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 3:55 AM
Tongue in the cheek, full of onomatopoetic allure, alliteration and imagery. Loved to read it. Best for a win. Hugs.
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 10:42 PM
Thanks, Victor
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