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Raining Chunks of Ice

raining chunks of ice
leaving bare cold limbs in wake..
ice water gully

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2014 9:17:00 PM

the bad weather inspiring some great poetry in you, Sara!!

Tim B

Date: 2/14/2014 5:43:00 PM

This was painful to read. Not because it wasn't a lovely capture of emotion and nature, but because it hits too close to home. Thanks for sharing though Sara :).

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/14/2014 5:38:00 PM

well captured Sara hugs

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/13/2014 11:50:00 PM

When I lived in Texas, many years ago, I saw ice storms about once every three or four years! And they were terrible! This poem definitely reminds me of how it looked after the storm and when it begins to melt! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening my friend! What a brilliant poem here Sara, Great Work!!

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 2/13/2014 6:59:00 PM

''Leaving bare cold limbs in wake..'' is such a lovely phrase Sara : ). Though those chunks of ice seemed rather uninviting. Nicely done.

The Situation

Date: 2/13/2014 5:25:00 PM

it's melting here fast today. and it's warm after being so so cold.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/13/2014 5:21:00 PM

I can really feel the icy chill in these words. Normally, I enjoy the winter, but this year I can't wait for it to be over! This is a very nice write, Sara! Well done!...Thank you very much for the kind visit. I always appreciate your kind words.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/13/2014 2:21:00 PM

Nice poem. i've had my share of ice. Down here in Texas is cold, but not that much. I fee sorry for the people in Georgia. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/13/2014 2:02:00 PM

A lovely haiku,the ice gone,the water going;hope of sweet dry land at hand. This is prima Sara.

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/13/2014 11:41:00 AM

I am visualizing the scene! Not only due to your short but exquisite description. its like that in DE too!! Well done, good to read your work again, been a while!Asavvy1