Rainfall Reflections

A hush of gray descends, the world outside a blur
Of weeping glass and dancing leaves, a gentle stir.
The scent of wet earth and cooled pavement climbs the air,
As warmth from a steaming cup soothes away all care.

In her hands, a porcelain hug, the tea's floral grace,
Sweet steam whispers against the skin of her face.
The book on her knees, a weight of stories untold,
Its paper scent, a comfort, a history to hold.

The rhythmic drum of rain against the pane,
A soft, percussive melody to wash away the pain.
Each drop a tiny echo of a memory long past,
A life unfolding, too beautiful to ever last.

A sip of warmth, a bitter-sweet and soothing brew,
A taste of all the moments she has ever been through.
The cool ceramic on her palms, a solid, gentle feel,
The world outside is fading, but this moment is so real.

She closes her eyes and listens to the low hum,
The quiet symphony of the world she's come from.
The taste of tea, the smell of rain, the warmth within her soul,
The past and future merge to make her present whole.
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Date: 9/7/2025 7:49:00 AM
As I'm sipping a sunday morning ritual, my beloved "London Fog". I can't help but appreciate the reminder to a hug my favorite bookworm! Make sure someone hugs the person you see in the mirror :) Warmly A.S.
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Jami Patterson
Date: 9/10/2025 11:11:00 AM
Agreed thank you. I love a London fog with cinnamon.
Date: 9/3/2025 2:03:00 PM
A most pleasant cadence, I feel soothed, thoroughly immersed in sighting the "world outside" while taking in aromas. A lovely touch adding trees in the rainfall to view from a comforting indoor perspective and I like how human made contrivances for comfort like the window, indelibly connects with nature, "weeping glass". Lots of enjoyable lines with vibrant phrases.
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Jami Patterson
Date: 9/10/2025 11:11:00 AM
Thank You
Date: 9/1/2025 7:38:00 PM
I am totally enchanted by this write, in which you have engaged all of my senses as you wove a heartwarming narrative. Bravo, Jami! A FAVE for me. Thank you, Gershon
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