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Rained All Night

It started spitting
sprinkled drizzled
thought we were in
for a shower
but it rained
and rained all night
it poured
it pelted down
in torrents
came down in buckets
we didn’t drown
but we came close



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Posted on June 4, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/6/2019 7:47:00 PM
oh yes, we have been having days and nights like this too, Line. WEll described!
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Date: 6/6/2019 8:04:00 PM
Glad to see you did not drown either, Andrea.
Date: 6/5/2019 10:35:00 AM
Very good piece Line, this is really good going from the really serious but ends up quite humorous in a way if you like floods!
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Date: 6/5/2019 12:54:00 PM
LOL Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Gordon.
Date: 6/4/2019 9:58:00 PM
This starts out seriously serious, but ends up on a particularly note. BRAVO my friend.
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Date: 6/4/2019 10:10:00 PM
It's also very important to keep some form of flotation device in your purse.

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