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Raindrops Around Your Dimples

Even the raindrops
love to linger on your face
like my fingers' tip-toeing,
drop by drop they reach
around your naughty dimples
luscious lips are not too far.....





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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 23, 2012 at 12:46 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "#184" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

June 21, 2012 at 7:33 PM

this one is SO awesome. I am sure I must have seen it before, but you have so many comments they go on to another page! Congratulations. You picked a good one for that contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 21, 2012 at 6:07 PM

super congrats Kash on a wonderful winning poem luv.. how r u?

Debbie Guzzi

June 21, 2012 at 2:27 PM

So playfully charming! I especially love line 1. Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

June 21, 2012 at 1:51 PM

yeahooo!.. congrats, bud!!...:)

Poet Destroyer A

June 21, 2012 at 11:42 AM

Wow..kash ,congratulations with your wonderful win in Brian's contest... Take care pd... ;-)

Terry O'Leary

June 21, 2012 at 2:50 AM

Nice, sensual poem...wonderful... congratulations on your new wim! Terry

Poet Destroyer A

March 2, 2012 at 8:52 PM

KASH... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Debbie Guzzi

March 1, 2012 at 3:45 PM

some one loves someone very much! Light & Love

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 29, 2012 at 10:46 PM

Congratulations on your first place win! I am honored to share the spot with you. I also wanted to give you a big thank you for making me one of your faves. You are one of my favorite poets as well. I'm not sure if I had told you. Blessings, Rhonda

Christopher Bunton

February 29, 2012 at 4:49 PM

Congratulations!

Kim Merryman

February 29, 2012 at 3:30 PM

An excellent write, Kash. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Gautami Phookan

February 29, 2012 at 9:15 AM

Very artistically done!! Congrats Kash on your excellent win in the "sedoka" contsest...

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 29, 2012 at 6:55 AM

Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Sedoka Me Any Subject" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

February 29, 2012 at 5:11 AM

Yikes :-) so cool to see this one on top Kash! Congratulations to you :)

Nette Onclaud

February 28, 2012 at 10:01 PM

wowing me up the rooftops, kashi buddy... love this the first time i read it... big cheers to you for the win, yoohoo!..:) hugggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 28, 2012 at 6:52 PM

super congrats Kash on a dynamic first place win for this astounding Sedoka luv..

Gwendolen Song

February 28, 2012 at 6:18 PM

Gosh, u gotta quit writing poetry about my dimples!! ha ha. I had a strong feeling this sedoka was gonna be a strong contender in Russ's contest...I was right as usual. Congrats to you again, Kash. Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

February 28, 2012 at 5:11 PM

Passionate..Congrats on your win..Sara

Margaret Foster

February 28, 2012 at 4:12 AM

Conjours up a romantic scene. Delightful read...

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 26, 2012 at 11:37 AM

Hey there kash, this one's another romantic write from you! You sure do well in these kinds of writes... Congrats btw on all your wins! Thanks as well for the congrats!