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Poetry/Rhyme/ ABRACADABRA/Raindrop Garden
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1657-560-07
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, July 04, 2024
For the International Contest, ABRACADABRA
Sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 08/15/2024

Fourth Place

Form  ABRACADABRA created by William Kekaula

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Raindrop Garden

 
The cool raindrops wash over my lush flowers, a warm gentle breeze caressing blooms and ferns; the delicate rain, so needed to sustain, there are Bell, Cone, Corn, and Sun flower towers. With yellow, purple, pink, red and blue mingling, oh, how the garden loves these tranquil showers; fragrant petals of daisies, and violets, I do not care if it rains hours, hours and hours. This beautiful garden always for rain yearns, so needed to sustain, the delicate rain; in a silent garden one feels God's powers !
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mysore Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 10:22 PM
I stood for a while in the rain in your garden and read it again and again. lovely dear poet. this is my fav. congratulations. happy writing.
La France Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 10:09 AM
Thriveni, thank you so much for standing in the rain with me, and for the compliment, FAV, and congratulations, Constance
Empress Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 10:22 PM
Dear constance this is absolutely stunning! So well woven with such descriptive imagery! I love it! The last line depicts the warrior within you in such eloquence! Congratulations on your well deserved win! Pleasure reading this
La France Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Ink, thank you for the compliment, and lovely comment, and the congratulations, Constance
Woods Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 10:18 AM
How true and how gentle and peaceful this made me feel! You have such a way with expressing imagery and atmosphere in your writing! Xoxo
La France Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 8:13 PM
Crystol, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, Constance
Pinet Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 1:35 PM
Congratulations, Constance! Your beautiful poem "Raindrop Garden" has earned you a well-deserved “distinguished placement” in my poetry contest. Well done, my friend. Emile.
La France Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 8:13 PM
Emile, thank you for the contest and my placement, appreciate, and for the congratulations and compliment, Constance
Jones Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 11:09 PM
Sh this is refreshing like the rain you write about! Love the imagery! Good luck in the contest!
La France Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 1:11 AM
Karen, thank you for the compliment and encouragement, Constance
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