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Rainbow's Reality

Colours of creativity cloths thy convenant's cavity; sweet smiles spread over the swollen skies, alluring art... it's aura arrest the atmosphere ...reminding us of God's righteous resolution... rainbow!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2011 10:05:00 PM

Hey, I can see you made it with two poems in the final round of poetrysoup's contest and wanted to comment on one of your poems that made it thru,but the stupid ad is covering your poems on that page. I hope Soup takes care of that so that people can view your poetry that is in the Soup contest!

Crista Gorman

Date: 3/15/2011 5:42:00 AM

I like the line that says: God's righteous resolution... rainbow! Brilliant!

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 2/26/2011 11:35:00 AM

This is a absolutly beautiful read.Thanks Adeleke for your sweet congrats on my win.~Lots of luv~Teresa

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 2/13/2011 7:23:00 PM

One can see a rainbow like beauty in your Poem my friend. It was a joy to read this lovely write. Great use of alliteration in this short poem and thanks for appreciating my poem 'Autumn and its falling leaves PART I'. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra.....Adeleke Adeite

Daver Austin

Date: 2/12/2011 9:54:00 AM

Like a benevolent smile, the rainbow. Love this write. Love, daver

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/12/2011 8:23:00 AM

You don't have a lot of words here, but what you have conveys very colorful descriptiveness. This is a nice way to describe a rainbow.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2011 11:54:00 PM

wow, great alliteration indeed, Adeleke!!

William Kershaw

Date: 2/10/2011 9:53:00 AM

Just read this one! I believe you have truly captured the spirit of the rainbow and reminded us of what a gift from Him they are. Love, Will

Lisa Lee

Date: 2/10/2011 9:14:00 AM

Adeleke, thank you for your comments... I love your Rainbow's Reality. I don't think there are a lot of people who understand that the rainbow was once a weapon and that God has hung this weapon in the sky...The next question i have is... Where is God's arrow?

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 2/3/2011 11:49:00 PM

You shine like a rainbow in alliterations,wonderful.