Paulette Calasibetta Poet Couplet

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Rainbows End

The mirror of the sun lifts the veil of mist;
                                       warm and tender, gently kissed.

                                    A prism arc washes the dome of the sky;
                                    an illustration of hope where God is nigh.

                            A journey to the horizon, seeking the pot of gold;
                                 an elusive pursuit, for the dreams we hold.







May 28th, 2022
For: Bite Size Poem #45 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
Placed in the category of Honorable Mention
Rhymes validated on Rhymezone.com

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Line Gauthier October 26, 2022 at 7:23 AM Lovely flow, Paulette ~ Paulette Calasibetta October 26, 2022 at 7:55 AM Thank you Line ~ the image flowed right through me as I traveled through the pastoral country side of France. :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith June 8, 2022 at 8:38 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Rainbows End" is a lovely write/picture. A fresh rain and then a pretty rainbow make a wonderful day. Have a great/blessed day.................... Paulette Calasibetta June 9, 2022 at 7:20 AM Thank you Paula~I took this photo while I was in France ~it was a spectacular day~. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Beryl Edmonds June 8, 2022 at 7:11 AM This is stunningly beautiful Paulette, every word. Congratulations… Belle Paulette Calasibetta June 9, 2022 at 7:21 AM Belle, Thank you for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Christuraj Alex June 7, 2022 at 9:08 PM "mirror of the sun lifts the veil of mist" - Great image. Congratulations! Paulette Calasibetta June 9, 2022 at 7:21 AM Hi Christuraj, thanks for stopping by to comment. Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Janice Canerdy June 7, 2022 at 6:38 PM Paulette, this is such a beautiful, expressive poem. CONGRATS! Janice Paulette Calasibetta June 9, 2022 at 7:22 AM Thank you, Janice~glad you enjoyed it! :)Paulette

Valsa George June 2, 2022 at 10:14 PM Beautiful images and a lovely picture ! The elusive journey into the sky, seeking rainbow's end to procure the pot of gold is an interesting concept ! Very well composed, dear Paulette ! Paulette Calasibetta June 3, 2022 at 12:14 PM Thank you Valsa~rainbows are so magical; I couldn’t help writing this….I was going through photos of my trip to France, the beauty and serenity was breathtaking. :)Paulette

Victor Buhagiar May 29, 2022 at 11:13 PM Beautiful imagery written most serenely. Paulette Calasibetta May 30, 2022 at 5:17 AM Glad you enjoyed the serenity. Rainbows do that! :)Paulette

Sotto Poet May 29, 2022 at 1:28 PM Paulette, this is just stunning. Beautiful metaphor! Paulette Calasibetta May 30, 2022 at 5:19 AM Rainbows always give me that "aah" moment, as I believe it does for many people. Here is to Rainbows, my friend. :)Paulette

Connie Marcum Wong May 29, 2022 at 5:13 AM This is really beautiful Paulette. Stunning imagery! Blessings xxoo Paulette Calasibetta May 29, 2022 at 9:35 AM Thank you Connie~glad you enjoyed it. Rainbows are so magical! :)Paulette

Bill Baker May 28, 2022 at 11:44 PM I loved the imagery in your Couplets, Paulette. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill Paulette Calasibetta May 29, 2022 at 4:22 AM Thank you Bill, rainbows are so magical! Blessings, Paulette