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Rainbows At Night

And she touched my eyes...icy cold shivers went throughout organs as i opened these orbits, no one was there, yet i felt her presence more than ever. Fractals were enveloped in light And in this light, made up of various colours, were etherel objects. Each object with its own color signature. Vermillion, chartreuse, bloodred... changed with emotions wrapped its prey like a newborn when close to a loved one and with these colours we are reminded of our solitude, our independentness our results from choices that dictate the evils in which shroud life. i heard her voice again my eyes closed and then reopened to normalcy how i yearn to go back just two minutes. that's our dilemma, you know living in either the past or worrying about the future But never in the present. They did me a favour. all three of them together as One.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/28/2010 8:43:00 AM
Peter, thank your for supporting my contest with your poem. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:43:00 AM
You already know how much I enjoyed reading this poem, Peter, so just let me offer my congratulations on your success in John's contest. Love, carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:38:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem and placement in Moses contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy your victory..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/18/2009 12:22:00 PM
Very profound statement in that next-to-last verse, Peter. It's difficult to stay focussed on the present when the past has made us what we are today. Even though worrying about the future seems futile, it sometimes brings solutions or new paths to follow that can enhance our lives. You have a wonderful way of taking the reader inside your mind in your poems, Peter. Always an experience to read! Love, Carolyn
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