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Rainbow Symphony

I looked through my prism Still I could not see Your colors I wished for the beauty of a sunrise Wild flowers blooming Bright blue sky and emerald waters The colors of fall leaves I wanted a rainbow symphony To hear and see your majesty To walk along your red carpeted splendor The magnificence of you Hidden behind a wall of dark grey A protective layer of granite Cold to the touch Unyielding I chipped Searching for cracks Tapped out cryptic messages Hoping you would understand You guided me to the entry way past the sentinels Down the corridors To your banquet hall Where now I celebrate Marvel at the brilliance of you I see I hear I feel Each note My prism Inadequate to the task I see your colors Oh so many colors Rainbows cannot articulate Butterfly's look anemic Diamonds lack clarity I see I try to understand The magnificence of you The perfection The power The glory Yet I cannot You are I am not Yet because of you I see A glimpse of eternity New poem for SKAT's "All Colors are in" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/20/2013 6:18:00 PM
Skillfully and beautifully written. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2013 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Joyce.
Date: 10/18/2013 1:27:00 AM
Holy Smokes! Stunning quality. Simply elegant
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2013 10:52:00 AM
Thanks Karen, you have made me smile.
Date: 10/16/2013 9:02:00 PM
congrats.. PD
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/17/2013 8:20:00 AM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 10/16/2013 12:29:00 PM
OK Richard, here's the deal...If you're unmarried and not yet involved with a lady and have your eye on one, Um-uh...READ THIS POEM TOO HER!!...Congrats my friend - Tim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/17/2013 8:22:00 AM
*lol* fortunate for me I met my dream girl 21 years ago.
Date: 10/16/2013 11:49:00 AM
A powerful poem Richard....congratulations on this fine win.....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/17/2013 8:22:00 AM
Thanks Donna.
Date: 10/15/2013 10:02:00 PM
wow, love this one very much. :) Congratulations LOVE ~SKAT~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/17/2013 8:23:00 AM
Thanks for picking my poem SKAT
Date: 10/10/2013 8:39:00 AM
A wonderful symphony of words full of classic ethereal beauty.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/10/2013 9:58:00 AM
Thanks again Monterey!
Date: 9/28/2013 5:59:00 AM
outstanding pen dear Richard a symphony to be very proud of. Shadow x smile
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/10/2013 9:58:00 AM
Thanks Shadow.
Date: 9/26/2013 12:30:00 PM
I wish I had the words to tell you how beautiful this is, Richard...I don't..Not at the moment...Know that I have read...and marveled. 7 To my favs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/26/2013 3:37:00 PM
I'm at home, Richard...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2013 12:51:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, are you at school?
Date: 9/26/2013 12:30:00 PM
That 7 keeps us coming back....
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Date: 9/26/2013 9:22:00 AM
Hey Richard, my man! I apologize for not being on your site in awhile, decided to drop on by and say hi! and also to comment on this great and very beautiful poem that you wrote! It is outstanding and so beautiful you paint a picture, and when I read I imagine a man in love!!! Lovely write, great job!! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2013 9:52:00 AM
Thanks Chris!
Date: 9/26/2013 8:15:00 AM
Nice images creating a vast eternity, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2013 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram.
Date: 9/26/2013 7:41:00 AM
"The magnificence of you, hidden behind a wall of dark grey"...THIS! LOVE IT! A very, very touching revelation of heart & soul. Cherishing what matters. "Rainbows cannot articulate"...damn awesome!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2013 7:45:00 AM
Thanks Drake, always thrilled to get one of your "damns" !
Date: 9/26/2013 7:19:00 AM
- Thank you for your beautiful poem, Richard. - We live in a world where we often forget to "see" ... we must take the time to "see" and feel ....... a little rest from the stress! - Have a nice day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2013 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise, I really enjoyed your new poem this morning.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2013 7:46:00 AM
:)))

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