Rainbow of Color

…a darkened night streaked with a rainbow of color thunder roars, rain falls…

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/22/2010 8:25:00 AM

Great write, Wilma! Hope you are having better weather now! Ons hier het nog 'n lekker somer dag en geen reën! Al die beste ... Gert!.)

Brian Strand

Date: 8/22/2010 6:46:00 AM

Great imagery Wilma.Rgds Brian

James Fraser

Date: 8/21/2010 7:10:00 AM

I so enjoy the images my mind pictures as I read this wonderful Haiku >> James

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/21/2010 5:20:00 AM

I love this!!! I love colors and rain ..excelllent Haiku always Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2010 8:52:00 PM

this sounds like an extraordinary night, Wilma. Nice reading it! Luv, Andrea

Tobey Hill

Date: 8/20/2010 11:07:00 AM

lovely..TAH

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/20/2010 8:22:00 AM

Gorgeous description of nature here. Also you used the 5-7-5 set up - commendable. "The Circle Game" is a song - not a movie. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/20/2010 7:54:00 AM

A rare sight indeed, Wilma. I have never seen a rainbow at night. Perhaps it was caused by the glow of a full moon. Great haiku! Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/20/2010 5:28:00 AM

oh I love this!! I think this paints such a wonderful contrast & I can just imagine this-- did I tell you I love rainbows? haven't seen one in a while though :(... haha shall I call you rainbow bright now?? ;)