Rainbow Moment

Light-play ecstatically rides the air, in tones of pink, lavender, yellow, blue; cumuli smiles fill the skies, a blink or two of green slides by. Precipitation sighs its last goodbye; while Sol stretches its warming rays. Orange intermingles with rainbow’s Indigo edge; fade to azure heights, Where echoes the laughter of children Splashing about in puddles. I breathe in the scent of ozone and cast my eyes to Heaven’s Crayola-glory.
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Kingston Avatar
March 21, 2026 at 5:14 PM
This poem made me smile. Imagine riding a rainbow from it's start to its finish? Your last line is my favorite "I breathe in the scent of ozone and cast my eyes to Heaven’s Crayola-glory" I love that metaphor. I could read your poems all day.
Kiser Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 9:21 PM
Oh good, we do see a lot of smiles lately. This world can induce e them if we keep our spiritual eyes and ears open. I love seeing,hearing Nd feeling that extra dimension. Thanks so much.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 14, 2024 at 2:02 PM
I enjoyed reading your colorful write. God had His colors out. Hoped you are OK... Have a very blessed day........................
Kiser Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 9:22 PM
He did indeed, many thanks.
Wood Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 12:54 PM
Great imagery. I enjoyed this.
Kiser Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 9:23 PM
Thank you.
Maverick Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 2:51 PM
Well described with broad strokes, of imagrey And freedom inherent in its framework that Flows beautufully M L.'
Kiser Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 9:24 PM
I appreciate that.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 12:50 AM
I love the way you used colours. So well written.
Kiser Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 9:23 PM
Thank you Victor.
Proxenos Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 11:03 AM
What would the world do without CRAYOLA AND IT WOULD SEEM THAT THE RAINBOW IS ONE OF ONE OF THE FIRST DRAWINGS A CHILD DRAWS, GREat poem my friend - love it. PLEASE EXCUSE CAPS. BY NOW YOU MUST KNOW ITS MY DEFAULT. love Jennifer.
Kiser Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 12:14 PM
I think that says a lot about the purity of a child's spirit.
Downing  Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 6:28 PM
A colorful and delightful poem, M.L :)
Andresen Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 12:07 PM
- A beautiful, playful and colorful moment, M.L. :) - hugs
M  Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 3:46 PM
Love this poem ML especially the last line which ties up the poem beautifully! Debx
Buhagiar Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 10:30 PM
Delightful poem M. Don't know your name. Your imagery is great. Very poetic.
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 2:57 PM
beautifully colorful. Love this.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:56 AM
Your "Rainbow Moment" is a colorful/beautiful write. Enjoy your day writing away............
Proxenos Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 9:38 AM
Oh how i love this poem, He painted the rainbow in crayola glory, so that little ones could share in its magic. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 6:04 AM
Colorful like the rainbow, MLK. Much enjoyed the beauty you convey.
Baker Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 2:52 PM
I love the way you included the colors in you pleasing rainbow poem, my friend. Write On! M.L. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 2:30 PM
The glory of a rainbow fills the sky!
Lindley Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 12:02 PM
What colorful imagery in this very fine poetry my good friend. I can remember go outside to sight see and Mother Nature never disappoints. Reminds me, I should go for walk this afternoon. A FAV.
Lindley Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 12:02 PM
What colorful imagery in this very fine poetry my good friend. I can remember go outside to sight see and Mother Nature never disappoints. Reminds me, I should go for walk this afternoon. A FAV.
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