rainbow hiku

no pot of gold n b i o a w at the end of the r God's sacred vow

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 8/6/2025 4:08:00 PM

Wow. Huge congrats, dear Ma'am Rea for your big win. Love~BFA

Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/6/2025 7:25:00 AM

This is such a creative twist on a haiku, Andrea! The visual shape of the word "rainbow" cascading down is lovely—and the final line, “God’s sacred vow,” beautifully ties it to deeper meaning. Simple, artful, and uplifting!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/5/2025 8:23:00 PM

I played with 'summer', made it a hiku with art. I'm laughing. I think this is great word-wise and know the rainbow will be appreciated. You blessed me w/ a weighty gmail, and so much else that we need the phone. Found song on Jerry's pgs, loved it, but wished he'd also posted the words for me to follow. What is poem called on your pages? Love, CayCay

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/5/2025 4:20:00 PM

so delicious poetry, thanks poet for emotions

Bill Baker

Date: 8/5/2025 4:01:00 PM

"I will never destroy the earth by water again." Amen. I like the way many of you are using shape in your Haikus, Andrea. Take that AI! :-) Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill

Marilene Evans

Date: 8/5/2025 11:31:00 AM

Very creative!