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rainbow hiku

no pot of gold
                                    n    b
                                i              o
                            a                    w
at the end of the  r
 
                              God's sacred vow

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Vanya Evangeline Date: 8/13/2025 8:34:00 AM Beautiful poem & message, Andrea. It is written that wisdom from God is more precious than gold, after all~ Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/7/2025 4:05:00 AM I like this one. Congratulations on winner. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply

Bernard F. Asuncion Date: 8/6/2025 4:08:00 PM Wow. Huge congrats, dear Ma'am Rea for your big win. Love~BFA Login to Reply

Rowena Velasco Date: 8/6/2025 7:25:00 AM This is such a creative twist on a haiku, Andrea! The visual shape of the word "rainbow" cascading down is lovely—and the final line, “God’s sacred vow,” beautifully ties it to deeper meaning. Simple, artful, and Congratulations ! Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 8/5/2025 8:23:00 PM I played with 'summer', made it a hiku with art. I'm laughing. I think this is great word-wise and know the rainbow will be appreciated. You blessed me w/ a weighty gmail, and so much else that we need the phone. Found song on Jerry's pgs, loved it, but wished he'd also posted the words for me to follow. What is poem called on your pages? Love, CayCay Login to Reply

Yann Rolland Date: 8/5/2025 4:20:00 PM so delicious poetry, thanks poet for emotions Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 8/5/2025 4:01:00 PM "I will never destroy the earth by water again." Amen. I like the way many of you are using shape in your Haikus, Andrea. Take that AI! :-) Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill Login to Reply

Marilene Evans Date: 8/5/2025 11:31:00 AM Very creative! Login to Reply