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Rainbow Flow

I touch the arc of the rainbow,
just to watch the colors run.
Across the sunlit sky as though,
the Springtime dusk has begun.
Yet a fiery sunset, cannot be outdone.


For the contest:  Wow Me In 5 Lines
Sponsored by, Francine Roberts
Placement:  HM

naturequintain (english)

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Cory Long

May 3, 2011 at 1:19 PM

nice write I have enjoyed it.cory

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 26, 2011 at 8:18 AM

Congratulations on your win Paula in Francine's contest. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

April 25, 2011 at 5:22 PM

I liked the watercolor metaphor nice! Light & Love

Elaine George

April 25, 2011 at 10:10 AM

Beautiful, Paula. And thank you for the HM in your 'Crisis' Contest. Lainie

Sidney Beck

April 25, 2011 at 9:34 AM

This nice.....I particularly like the idea of touching the arc to watch the colours run as if it was wet paint mmmmmm lovely imagery....and thank you for the third place in CRISIS...i was worried because a number of soupers didnt "see" the key words like "sank" "shot up" etc which are obviously related to the japanese attack......best wishes as always...Syd

Jack Horne

April 24, 2011 at 8:51 AM

many congrats : )

Andrea Dietrich

April 24, 2011 at 12:18 AM

A colorful one, Paula. And a congatuations on the HM> I am glad to have found this one here to finally read.

John Freeman

April 23, 2011 at 9:59 PM

Great to see you in the winner's circle Paula. Congratulations on your honored place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 23, 2011 at 9:24 PM

Congrats Paula on your HM in Francine's contest with this entry that wowed her and gave u a great honor luv.. enjoy as u celebrate the joy of Easter Sunday with luv..