Rainbow Flow

I touch the arc of the rainbow,
just to watch the colors run.
Across the sunlit sky as though,
the Springtime dusk has begun.
Yet a fiery sunset, cannot be outdone.


For the contest:  Wow Me In 5 Lines
Sponsored by, Francine Roberts
Placement:  HM

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/3/2011 1:19:00 PM
nice write I have enjoyed it.cory
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Date: 4/26/2011 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Paula in Francine's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 5:22:00 PM
I liked the watercolor metaphor nice! Light & Love
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Date: 4/25/2011 10:10:00 AM
Beautiful, Paula. And thank you for the HM in your 'Crisis' Contest. Lainie
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Date: 4/25/2011 9:34:00 AM
This nice.....I particularly like the idea of touching the arc to watch the colours run as if it was wet paint mmmmmm lovely imagery....and thank you for the third place in CRISIS...i was worried because a number of soupers didnt "see" the key words like "sank" "shot up" etc which are obviously related to the japanese attack......best wishes as always...Syd
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Date: 4/24/2011 8:51:00 AM
many congrats : )
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Date: 4/24/2011 12:18:00 AM
A colorful one, Paula. And a congatuations on the HM> I am glad to have found this one here to finally read.
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Date: 4/23/2011 9:59:00 PM
Great to see you in the winner's circle Paula. Congratulations on your honored place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/23/2011 9:24:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your HM in Francine's contest with this entry that wowed her and gave u a great honor luv.. enjoy as u celebrate the joy of Easter Sunday with luv..
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Date: 4/23/2011 7:30:00 PM
Relly nice Paula. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/23/2011 6:59:00 PM
Awesome imagery Paula! Congratulations
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Date: 4/23/2011 6:26:00 PM
lovely quintain Paula, great imagery, congrats on your HM in the Wow Me contest
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