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Rainbow Colored Camouflage

There is a call in the distance I know my future will witness. No calm offer shields my bubble, it floats high to crash, then crumble … Soon will come your final undone. I use love-you-smiles to battle on while you destroy your own Avalon. Real life constantly sabotages my feel beneath smiling camouflage. I already hear gentle guitar chords sadly strum and wish purifying, steady rain to rinse me numb. Doves will later all gather for a united coo as the world finally releases all forms of you. In a fire never man-begun, your purest force will heighten flames, your final quiet will be spun, and the sun in you will set tamed. Then, upon your clear horizon dear peace will ease all my frightened. ... CayCay March 16, 2017

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Date: 3/19/2017 4:02:00 PM
oh my gosh, I just commented to this and I came back to it and my comment is not here. WHAT??? Anyway, again I will tell you, this is some splendid writing. Sounds like free verse to me, which YOU are very good at! Am I mistaken? or was this to be narrative only?
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Date: 3/18/2017 5:25:00 PM
Beautifully written, CayCay! Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/17/2017 12:59:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and metaphors, Cay Cay! I love the line, as the world finally releases all forms of you...awesome! Best of luck and hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/16/2017 9:47:00 PM
Wonderful poem, CayCay, great imagery great form ~* good luck
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Date: 3/16/2017 6:58:00 PM
Awesome write CayCay~good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 3/16/2017 2:58:00 PM
- A truly wonderful poem, CayCay - It is beautifully framed from beginning to end - Best of luck in the contest, hoping it will be at the top on the wins list - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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