Rainbow Arc Across the Azure Sky

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"Lost in a dream with idyllic abstract musing." Quote _by Poet Absorbing a double scoop of azure, Bottom of the golden-brown waffle Cone, green, yellow, orange, red, Dripping down melting, into the horizon. Evening's laughter shatters the azure sky; Frowning disapproval, the sun Gently wipes away it's tears for Harmonious promise of future Idyllic, enormity, day of earth. Jabbering shadow falling across Knobby, frayed, wings and contagious Love: power to renew universe heart. 12/7/2021 Theme-Chosen Azure ABC Form ''A'' Forms, New Poems Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 12/31/2021 4:18:00 PM

Eve, congratulations on your First Place win in my "A" Forms Contest with this lovely poem, your is wonderful and I like the image too ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/31/2021 5:31:00 AM

This is such a gorgeous write! I knew immediately it was a place holder before read the fourth line. Wow!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/23/2021 8:37:00 AM

WoW! Eve, This is just breathtaking. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and your loved ones :-)Alexis

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/23/2021 7:22:00 AM

Back with Congratulation on this win. A beautiful write and picture. Love It. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/23/2021 4:14:00 AM

Beautiful ABC form with great depth. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/22/2021 9:20:00 PM

Such lovely images…a double scoop of azure! Congratulations!

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/22/2021 7:36:00 PM

My dear, Eve, 'twas an understandable detour, nonetheless, Constance nailed your piece as noteworthy, and as a fellow sponsor, I'd hammer it in for reassurance my friend! Mele Kalikimaka a Hau'oli Maka Hiki Hou to you and your loved ones, Ke Akua pu!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/20/2021 1:32:00 PM

Your "Rainbow Arc Across the Azure Sky" write and picture are beautiful. Love your line, "Love: power to renew universe heart." And it can. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

David Kavanagh

Date: 12/10/2021 12:40:00 PM

Your poetry prowess is quite startling Eve, never mundane, you see through the picture into the reality of what your mind discerns, beautifully crafted ABC, all the best for contest, cheers David