Rain Rain Won'T You Come My Way

Oft' we've heard that trite and tiresome old cliche':
"Rain! Rain! Go away and come again another day!"
Excuse me, but I happen to hold a different point of view.
I like the rain along with a tad of lightning and thunder too!

Nearly every afternoon the heavens become dark and overcast.
Praise the Lord! We'll get some blessed rain at last!
Alas, 'tis not to be since not a threatening cloud remains;
The storm skips over us, dousing instead the Kansas plains!

Rain! Rain! Won't you come and drench my thirsty lawn?
If it doesn't happen soon, my wish for pretty roses is foregone!
The grass is so very sparse, utterly brown and barren,
That it has the appearance of the vast and arid Saharan!

The Chamber of Commerce boasts of skies sunny and clear,
So hordes of tourists come to enjoy the exquisite beauty here.
So what if a little rain spoils their pla what a dirty shame!
If they don't like it, they can return to whence they came!

I've done the Rain Dance and knelt to pray on ben'ded knee,
To proffer to that Meteorologist in the Sky my fervent plea!
Only He determines whether we deserve a drenching rain or sun.
There ain't much we can do about it, when all is said and done!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 2 in Destroyer's "Best Rain Poem" - Contest - July 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/18/2011 9:21:00 PM
Very lovely. I loved your rain dance. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 7/18/2011 1:50:00 PM
Surely wish you could have some of our nice rain. We have been more than blessed with it this spring and summer but I have to admit that the grass is green and the roses are blooming. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/18/2011 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations Bob on your win in the contest of P.D. "Rain". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2011 2:11:00 AM
Well done in the contest mate... Have to get our Aboriginal rainmakers to bring you a drink...:) Shilling Jackson n Quartpot, used to do rain dances in the 60s hereaouts, and the rain came too. on ya Bob, Don
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Date: 7/17/2011 10:50:00 PM
always a treat to read you, robert...sunny congrats on your special win :) huggs
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Date: 7/17/2011 3:40:00 PM
I definitely share your thoughts on rain, Bob :) I wrote something similar to this but have never posted it here---Really enjoyed this rain poem of yours, I sure do hope rain comes my way soon too ;) Super congrats on your win :D
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Date: 7/17/2011 3:23:00 PM
I always enjoy your poems. This is another great one. Congratulations on your second place win.!! Lee
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Date: 7/17/2011 2:38:00 PM
Nice win Bob. I take it you are in the midwest from that Kansas reference. I grew up in St. Joe, MO but find the beaches here in teh SE corner of NC more to my liking. But we could use some rain here as well. Mike
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Date: 7/17/2011 8:16:00 AM
My congratulations on this second place win, Bob
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Date: 7/17/2011 7:13:00 AM
A great write Bob.... Its so nice to be in the same list as you are... I have missed your work latley but will catch up soon..Michael
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Date: 7/17/2011 7:09:00 AM
Congrats Bob on your stellar second place with this lovely rain essence my friend.. luv that Praise the Lord we're gonna get some rain.. HE always answers prayers ..amen..enjoy luv..
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Date: 7/17/2011 2:24:00 AM
Robert, Congratulations on your great Rain entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem about my favorite refreshing gift of life. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d
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Date: 7/17/2011 1:02:00 AM
sounds pretty dry where you are Bob, well done congrats, David
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:13:00 PM
You know when I am on the soup. I like to read your poetry. They R never the same. I have enjoyed your words today. Thank U Rob. 4 always comment me back. It is always nice 2 kkep your readers happy.
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Date: 3/27/2010 3:03:00 PM
I do hear you, Robert...I'm posting this for Jimmy...Thanks for reading and leaving the encouraging comments for me.. I'll print a couple of your poems so he can enjoy them..he has a wonderful sense of humor and would enjoy them as I do..And I wish you rain..I really do.. God bless....Audrey for Jimmy
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Date: 3/27/2010 11:10:00 AM
If the rain dance don't work I don't know what to tell ya. How ever good luck.
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