Rain Puddle World

Clouds drift lazy by sunlight ripples in the breeze A blue sky on glass Edges of my world do blur captured in a rain puddle
For Brian Strand's contest Placement: 2nd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:24 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in the contest Paula. Love, Carol
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June 6, 2011 at 8:31 AM
a wonderful delight Paula and congrats on the 2nd place.. so nice to read refreshing poetry.. thankxx so much for choosing "Spadille" as one of your winners from among the grand list of poets who won.. always a pleasure to create something new for u luv..thankxxx..
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:39 PM
Yes, I remember this gem. Congrats again!!
Guzzi Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 4:36 PM
yes reflections, one always wonders at them....I bet you felt for Alice! ;) Congrad's on your BIG win. LIght & Love
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June 5, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Brilliant imagery, Paula, and I especially love the message conveyed in your last two lines. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn
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June 5, 2011 at 11:01 AM
Lots of puddles here in No Ca...what a beauty you penned..congrats. BG
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June 5, 2011 at 10:38 AM
Congrats Paula on your win. This piece conjures up such a great image. Best wishes Em :)
Sweetheart Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:08 AM
Congrats Paula on your second place win in Brian's contest with this rare beauty my friend..luv..
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June 5, 2011 at 7:38 AM
impressive work, paula.. congrats on the high award! :) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 9:56 PM
I really like this title to go with this poem. A cool tanka, Paula. Down there in the sizzling heat of the desert!
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June 3, 2011 at 1:00 PM
very nice Paula. Good luck in the contest. There are no rain puddles here to reflect anything. Wishing there were. In a severe drought her in Fl.
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June 3, 2011 at 12:58 PM
this is awesome good job, good luck in the contest.cory
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