Rain On Rannoch Moor

A misty Scottish gale blows fierce
From the grey that clouds the hills
I step onto her western way
Desolate, damp and chilled

Her grasses grow brown and lavender
Stretching as far as I can see
While Hill tops and the horizon
Lead me deep into a peaty sea

From the banks of black Loch Tula
At the base of rocky Bens,
I walk this winding pathway 
Bearing forward to Ba bridge

I stop to survey the ruins
That were once, hardier than I
And climb up to a mountain's  pass
with Glencoe in my sights

The Buachaille and Beinn a' Chrulaiste
Towers high out from the fog
Herding me towards the gateway
Of the Glen and from the bog 

And yet that cold wind continues
Against me all the while
And the rain blows much harder
Urging me to turn away

But the Highland call has taken me
From far enough away
That I see the moor's true beauty
Even on this rainy day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/8/2017 3:41:00 AM
Justin - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
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Justin Clason
Date: 10/8/2017 7:39:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/7/2017 5:49:00 PM
Great imagery. Congrats
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Date: 10/8/2017 7:40:00 AM
Thank you Andrew
Date: 10/7/2017 1:24:00 PM
Very nicely done. Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 10/8/2017 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Dale
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