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Rain of the Night

Pampas grass soaking
Wet, burdened under the weight
Of heavy night's rain

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Kelly Zakerski

Date: 9/20/2009 3:10:00 AM

Love it and so true because I grow it around my pond. So visual.

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/17/2009 12:57:00 PM

Strong image, you have a gift for haiku, please write some more...Raul

Erica Lewis

Date: 9/14/2009 3:23:00 PM

I can smell it...very evocative!

Nathan Leccese

Date: 9/10/2009 11:00:00 PM

Beautful Haiku. I love the way you tied in each line. Great capture! Thanks for your comments and support in my contest. Nate

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/10/2009 7:38:00 PM

Nice haiku - done in 5-7-5 format.I think NYC is going to get a lot of rain tomorrow. Keep'em coming Sara Yours Matthew Anish

John Freeman

Date: 9/10/2009 6:02:00 PM

The grass praises the rain, the burden is acceptable. Selah! Sincerely, John Moses

Krista Kurth

Date: 9/10/2009 4:45:00 PM

Sara, I can see the grass bending down, flattened under the weight of the water. Nice haiku. Krista

Jayne Eggins

Date: 9/10/2009 11:05:00 AM

Ahhhh makes me think of summer beautiful little haiku Sara thank you for your comments on my poem its much appreciated .. kind regards Jayne

James Fraser

Date: 9/10/2009 10:56:00 AM

Heaven sent Haiku Sara, nice poem>>James

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/10/2009 10:47:00 AM

nicely done, did you write a poem for the 9-11?

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/10/2009 10:19:00 AM

nice rhyme keep writing ;)

Corinne Curcio

Date: 9/10/2009 9:39:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Sara. Conjures up so much in so few words

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/10/2009 8:41:00 AM

grass with the heavy burden ......what a concept ....... nicely written

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 9/10/2009 7:33:00 AM

nicely written Sara. :) Looking forward to reading more.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/10/2009 7:25:00 AM

Great description of the Pampas Grass being pelted by rain. I had some growing in my yard, but the leaves are razor sharp and produced many cuts. Nice work, Sara! Love, Carolyn

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/10/2009 6:48:00 AM

Poised...enriched words. Pls consider 5/7/5 cylab; the second cylab is not 7. May I suggest this: Wet and burdened under weight. Wishing you all the best.

Rain of the Night

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