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Rain of Feathers

Eider down feathers
fall down around me
like snow from the sky,
I raise my arms 
turn in a circle
and take in 
the wanton
tempest
of my fury,


A lampshade flung
against a wall,
the base cracked,
the shade torn,
the bedside table
battered and rammed
against a dresser 
like an abusive husband’s wife,


The mirror shattered 
into a million pieces,
each one reflecting 
a mask of rage,
someone I don’t recognize
glares back at me 
from the ice like bits of glass,


The mattress ripped open,
springs popping out 
like a hundred jack in the boxes,
only there were no jacks
or any boxes,
just rusted,old springs
flopping around like fish
in a sea of impotence,


And now,
with the pillows 
sliced and flung 
about the room,
a calming rain of feathers
slowly falls around me,


And I am at peace once again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/3/2008 9:35:00 PM
pillow fight? in my favs too.beautiful poem
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Date: 8/3/2008 11:04:00 AM
I absolutely love this! Madness in tranquility...you and I are two birds of a feather.
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Date: 8/2/2008 10:07:00 PM
wow! this is really good! to my favs! -Alyssa
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