Joanna Daniel Poet Free verse

Rain Kiss

Daisies wear dewy dimples,
even as the merry marigolds seem to melt...

    And on that faraway mountain, in a summer cottage,
 those roses blush redder when the rain kisses them.


04.22.2021

Lines taken from "A candid rainscape"

For Greg Barden's "Liberum Divisa 5" contest

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Suk Raj Darjee August 13, 2021 at 2:17 AM Wow! Hearty Congratulations to you. Praiseworthy lines.

Andy Chunn June 2, 2021 at 1:55 PM Congratulations on your win. Beautiful lines of alliteration and descriptions.

Malabika Ray Choudhury May 27, 2021 at 1:32 PM Congratulations, Jo, on your trophy win. Love this beautiful poem with graceful, serene images. BW ~ Mala

John Hamilton May 27, 2021 at 8:51 AM Congrats Jo on a wonderful winning write!

Beata Agustin May 27, 2021 at 1:41 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Sam Kauffman May 26, 2021 at 10:11 AM Congratulations on your trophy win Jo! This is a beautiful picture of personification. Love the blushing roses. All the best.

Michelle Faulkner May 26, 2021 at 10:10 AM Wow! Congratulations on your top win with this lovely gem, so romantic-

Paula Goldsmith May 26, 2021 at 9:43 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I Love It. Have a blessed day................

Regina Mcintosh May 26, 2021 at 4:51 AM Love, love, love this. So elegant and graceful, soothing and praiseworthy. God bless you with love, Gina

Gregory Richard Barden May 25, 2021 at 4:39 PM Sincere congratulations on your win in the Liberum Divisa 5 Poetry Contest, Jo - thank you so much for entering! This was a very tough contest to judge as there were SO many wonderful entries - I loved reading your submission. Blessings! - the bard Joanna Daniel May 25, 2021 at 8:48 PM Wow! Thank you from the bottom of my heart for the trophy win:) can't believe it still...:)

Victor Buhagiar April 22, 2021 at 1:56 AM Wonderful extract Jo. Best for a win.

Jan Allison April 22, 2021 at 12:59 AM absolutely delightful imagery Jo and I imagine the sponsor will like the lay out of the poem as he uses this type of formatting a great deal - its very effective!:-) hugs Jan xx