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Rain Kiss

Daisies wear dewy dimples, even as the merry marigolds seem to melt... And on that faraway mountain, in a summer cottage, those roses blush redder when the rain kisses them. 04.22.2021 Lines taken from "A candid rainscape" For Greg Barden's "Liberum Divisa 5" contest

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Suk Raj Darjee

Date: 8/13/2021 2:17:00 AM

Wow! Hearty Congratulations to you. Praiseworthy lines.

Andy Chunn

Date: 6/2/2021 1:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Beautiful lines of alliteration and descriptions.

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 5/27/2021 8:27:00 PM

Jo, Congratulations on your 1st Place win!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/27/2021 1:32:00 PM

Congratulations, Jo, on your trophy win. Love this beautiful poem with graceful, serene images. BW ~ Mala

John Hamilton

Date: 5/27/2021 8:51:00 AM

Congrats Jo on a wonderful winning write!

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/27/2021 1:41:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/26/2021 10:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your trophy win Jo! This is a beautiful picture of personification. Love the blushing roses. All the best.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/26/2021 10:10:00 AM

Wow! Congratulations on your top win with this lovely gem, so romantic-

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/26/2021 9:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I Love It. Have a blessed day................

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/26/2021 4:51:00 AM

Love, love, love this. So elegant and graceful, soothing and praiseworthy. God bless you with love, Gina

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 5/25/2021 4:39:00 PM

Sincere congratulations on your win in the Liberum Divisa 5 Poetry Contest, Jo - thank you so much for entering! This was a very tough contest to judge as there were SO many wonderful entries - I loved reading your submission. Blessings! - the bard

Joanna Daniel
Date: 5/25/2021 8:48:00 PM

Wow! Thank you from the bottom of my heart for the trophy win:) can't believe it still...:)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/22/2021 1:56:00 AM

Wonderful extract Jo. Best for a win.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/22/2021 12:59:00 AM

absolutely delightful imagery Jo and I imagine the sponsor will like the lay out of the poem as he uses this type of formatting a great deal - its very effective!:-) hugs Jan xx