Rain Is Coming By Tears

Wonderful. Kind wishes to you, Kai

That middle couplet comparing lies to rings under the eyes. Outstanding

a womans words. where an mans would be anger.

So interesting. Great wording, Paige!

This is so beautiful. I love the emotions it evokes. Blessings.

enjoyed your tender imagery...evocative and emotive words, dearest Paige. loved 'rain is losing tears.' unique & creative. wishing you well, hugs, Sara

So deeply emotive dear Paige..

Tears, a phenomena of many causes, can be greater than the disappointment. I enjoy how deeply into the human heart that this tale goes.

Standing tall, after all, with retina shed, images begone, very deep! I felt I was teased a little as well as I read "Fingers slip, up here!" It gives an essence of going down then up. Smiling

I’m fascinated by the structure of your poem Paige. The lines appear to be random obscure pieces of a jigsaw yet the inner thoughts and observations come together skilfully and beautifully to help covey a sense of deep emotional release. I really like the blurring of tears with Mother Nature. Lovely work. Cheers - Gary

The rain as clouds shedding tears is very poetic. Love the whole poem dear Paige.

this is quite emotional , enjoyed

To dear Paige, The phrase "rain is losing tears" is one that I totally appreciate. The imagery you have created is warm, visceral, and captivating. The phrase "you in the rain, just remembering" is one of my favorites since it makes me feel a tinge of melancholy.

Dear Paige, I adore the idea of "rain is losing tears". Your imagery is tender, tactile, intriguing. I just love "you in the rain, just remembering", it gives me a subtle wistful feeling. Just beautiful with a tinge of longing. Warmest wishes, my dear poet friend.. ~Susan

Very interesting read! Have a wonderful weekend :-)

Beautiful Rain & Tears mixture. I like the first line. This sounds like a younger lover. I believe the retina can move around, then one needs an optic operation ~ can you believe ! Perhaps the final line could be more grounded, if it’s for readers - but if for own understanding & for you, it is ok. Be blessed beyond your fondest dreams. X