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Rain Into Night

soft whisper day fading into shadows afternoon rests downtown outing friends and strangers gather passing conversations repeated well-played songs desires and dreams linger dreams and desires songs played well repeated conversations passing gather strangers and friends outing downtown rests afternoon shadows into fading day whisper soft

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Date: 9/13/2020 1:24:00 PM
ahh, another one of those mirror poems (palindromes??) I am not sure if I said it right or not. Anyway, a lovely read.
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Date: 9/11/2020 11:16:00 AM
I like the upbeat feel to your poem, Mike, and the way friends gather on an evening. Maybe soon such gatherings will be safe in the U.S. I miss times like this. Nicely done! Best wishes, Carolyn
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