Rain In the Sickroom

Nebula is paltering with
his bucket of water
banging it against
the buckets of other children.

And soon the clamour
of their noisy gang
beats the rhythm
for the tripping water.

I’m reaching out for you,
I harvest a few drops
I come to sprinkle their infant dew
— foolishly scattered
by those not old enough to know
it’s later to be sought out — 
upon your face.

Your eyes are looking through the eyelids,
indulging in the fresh juice
of heaven
heedless of the azure curtains drawn
                                                        around you,
heedless of the windows, the walls, the wails.

You’re running faster
than any seabird
You’re playing jollier 
than any child
You’re seeing farther
than any eye

sleeping, dreaming, motionless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dalei Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 12:20 PM
Hi Archontoula, A great poem. Fresh juice of heaven.....oh stupendous wordings. Super 7 from me. Enjoyed each line............//:) hugs
Alexandropoulou Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 6:44 PM
A super thank you for enjoying it so much. It is one of the poems that are very close to my heart. Wish you a very poetic May.
A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 1:30 AM
AA, I really like this. LINDA
Alexandropoulou Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 3:32 AM
Thank you for dropping by and appreciating my poetry Linda. Will be back soon with something new.
A  Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 12:23 PM
WOW. SK
Alexandropoulou Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:08 PM
Thank you, SK!!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 4:19 PM
gosh, is it metaphoric of death? Or am I reading too much into it. GREAT imagery in this one!
Alexandropoulou Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 6:54 AM
Andrea, it does not imply death, just inability to move, however one could also read death in this. The truth is, that after that accident my father (this is person in question here) could not paint, engrave, write and do what he used to and his health started deteriorating.... It was the first time I had seen him fallen. Thank you for the kind comment!
Quinn Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 7:53 PM
It was your comment that lured me into reading your poetry and i am so glad.. it is so from the heart and utterly magnificent. Awareness speaks. take care
Alexandropoulou Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 11:17 AM
You really honour me with your words, Michael. I have feasted on your poetry, too. Thank you
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