Rain In the Sickroom

Nebula is paltering with
his bucket of water
banging it against
the buckets of other children.

And soon the clamour
of their noisy gang
beats the rhythm
for the tripping water.

I’m reaching out for you,
I harvest a few drops
I come to sprinkle their infant dew
— foolishly scattered
by those not old enough to know
it’s later to be sought out — 
upon your face.

Your eyes are looking through the eyelids,
indulging in the fresh juice
of heaven
heedless of the azure curtains drawn
                                                        around you,
heedless of the windows, the walls, the wails.

You’re running faster
than any seabird
You’re playing jollier 
than any child
You’re seeing farther
than any eye

sleeping, dreaming, motionless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/3/2016 12:20:00 PM
Hi Archontoula, A great poem. Fresh juice of heaven.....oh stupendous wordings. Super 7 from me. Enjoyed each line............//:) hugs
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 5/3/2016 6:44:00 PM
A super thank you for enjoying it so much. It is one of the poems that are very close to my heart. Wish you a very poetic May.
Date: 2/18/2016 1:30:00 AM
AA, I really like this. LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2016 3:32:00 AM
Thank you for dropping by and appreciating my poetry Linda. Will be back soon with something new.
Date: 11/30/2015 12:23:00 PM
WOW. SK
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Date: 12/1/2015 3:08:00 PM
Thank you, SK!!!
Date: 5/7/2015 4:19:00 PM
gosh, is it metaphoric of death? Or am I reading too much into it. GREAT imagery in this one!
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Date: 5/8/2015 6:54:00 AM
Andrea, it does not imply death, just inability to move, however one could also read death in this. The truth is, that after that accident my father (this is person in question here) could not paint, engrave, write and do what he used to and his health started deteriorating.... It was the first time I had seen him fallen. Thank you for the kind comment!
Date: 4/18/2015 7:53:00 PM
It was your comment that lured me into reading your poetry and i am so glad.. it is so from the heart and utterly magnificent. Awareness speaks. take care
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Date: 4/20/2015 11:17:00 AM
You really honour me with your words, Michael. I have feasted on your poetry, too. Thank you
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