Rain From Heaven

I kissed the rain
As it caressed my aches and pains
Darkened skies, as the wind passes me by
Wandering among the gravestones
Wondering where my final place shall be
Footprints in the earth softly whisper, soon, soon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dunn Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 3:46 PM
Dear Paul, Love how you blend life and death, wandering amongst the gravestones, wondering where my final place shall be, GREAT LINES, my friend Paul outstanding piece the whole thing has so much power to it I'm thilled that I went back to read it, and found it, cheri needs pic though lol
Vaso Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 8:40 PM
Thanks Cherl
Manassian Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 8:06 PM
Oh....no. Not soon soon! Lovely write, but it left me sad...
Vaso Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 8:43 PM
Free tickles after every sad poem!! I may write dark and sad, but I want everyone smiling in the end!!!
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 10:41 AM
- Lovely described, Arthur! - Good luck in the contest! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 8:42 PM
Thanks Anne, I missed the comments on this poem, but better late than never!!! xoxo
Horsman Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 10:19 AM
this could be written on your epitaph, it is that good...
Vaso Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 8:41 PM
Thanks Harry, hopefully that wont be for a few more days!!! :)
Roberts Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 8:28 PM
Nice write my friend, i love the light rain. ...Seren
Vaso Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 8:41 PM
Somehow I missed the comments on this poem, thank you
Jones Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 7:38 PM
This is somehow peaceful...I enjoyed...
Vaso Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 10:06 PM
Thank you so much Donna
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