Paul Callus Poet Free verse

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Rain Falls Unbroken

Dressed in mourning robes 
lonely and heartbroken
she sits in semi-darkness
by the glowing embers
rocking herself to the
rhythmic unbroken sound
of torrential rain...
a therapeutic balm
gently easing the pain 
healing her heart’s misery.

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© 21st September 2017
Placed 4th

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Susan Ashley December 7, 2017 at 7:46 PM Paul, such depths of sadness expressed in your melancholy imagery but also hope expressed for her spirit's healing in the freeing, cleansing, soothing baptism of the 'therapeutic' rain. I love the rain as I find it soothing as well. A beautiful write my friend, congrats on your fine placement. Warmest wishes ~Susan Paul Callus December 8, 2017 at 3:05 PM Thank you, Susan; your insightful remarks are an apt follow-up to this poem. I love the sound of rain and I have spent much time watching it falling outside the window. I do believe in its therapeutic powers! ~ Warm regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos October 4, 2017 at 2:11 PM Paul, I can strongly identify with this beautiful piece, as after a very stressful day, it's so much easier for me to relax and fall asleep if I listen to the sound of thunder storms (whether natural or artificial) in the background. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! BRAVO! Pandita Paul Callus October 4, 2017 at 3:20 PM Your 'bravo' and the rest of your lovely comments are very much appreciated, Pandita. Thank you, my friend! Hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong October 1, 2017 at 2:14 AM Rain does have the ability to soothe. Congratulations on a most deserving win! : ) Paul Callus October 2, 2017 at 3:10 PM Thank you, Connie. I have been very busy lately and have had little time for Soup and writing; trying to catch up.... Regards // paul

Robert Lindley September 28, 2017 at 8:54 PM THIS IN ITS BEAUTY, DEPTH, FLOW AND COMPARISONS, AWES ME. Some very deep pondering here and walking down the right path to its ending light. Paul Callus September 29, 2017 at 4:07 PM Thank you for your insightful comments, Robert. Wishing you a nice weekend, my friend. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2017 at 8:13 PM Lovely in its sadness, and congrats for your win, Paul. Paul Callus September 25, 2017 at 4:37 PM Thank you, Andrea. Regards // paul

Jan Allison September 24, 2017 at 4:53 PM Dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) hugs jan xx Paul Callus September 25, 2017 at 4:36 PM Thank you, Jan:) You did even better...I looked high up and saw you standing on the top:) Hugs // paul

Janis Medders Tobechi September 24, 2017 at 11:16 AM Rain is always therapeutic. You have done a great job in capturing the mood. Congratulations on your win. Paul Callus September 24, 2017 at 1:13 PM I love rain, Janis....perhaps that's why I relate to it and its comforting effect. Thank you for both comments and congrats. Regards // paul

Lin Lane September 24, 2017 at 11:12 AM Despite her sadness, I feel the comfort of the setting in which you've placed her. Good placement, Paul. Paul Callus September 24, 2017 at 1:10 PM Thank you Lin; I love how you worded your lovely comment. Best regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney September 24, 2017 at 5:02 AM Congratulations Paul: I have missed reading your insightful work. Hugs, SuZ Paul Callus September 24, 2017 at 8:37 AM It's a pleasure to have you stopping by, Suzanne. I had not realized that you were back posting again. I visited your 2 latest poems, and they have been a delight to read. Hugs // paul

Joseph May September 23, 2017 at 1:03 PM Congrats on your win Paul Paul Callus September 23, 2017 at 1:51 PM Thank you, Joseph. Regards // paul

Michael Tor September 23, 2017 at 12:09 PM Paul your write was my personal favorite from the winners list. Your words not only create a sad soul trying to heal through their heartfelt loss, but you add the dark surroundings. For some rain causes depression, and here it creates an escape of venting the pain by rocking, letting out a physical emotion of coping and possibly healing and closer. Loved how you wrote this... Paul Callus September 23, 2017 at 1:48 PM Thank you very much for your insightful comments, Michael; they are truly appreciated...so is your visit. Best regards // paul

Eve Roper September 23, 2017 at 11:52 AM Congratulations on your win, Paul. Hugs Eve Paul Callus September 23, 2017 at 2:04 PM Thank you, Eve; you did well yourself:) hugs // paul

John Michaels September 23, 2017 at 9:33 AM A powerful and well-composed piece, Paul, which plucks at the heart-strings. Congratulations on your win! Regards, John. Paul Callus September 23, 2017 at 2:05 PM Thank you for your feedback and congrats, John. Regards // paul

Constance La France September 23, 2017 at 9:10 AM Paul, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned Free Verse. Well done ! Paul Callus September 23, 2017 at 2:06 PM Glad you liked it Constance; thank you for putting it on the winners' list. Best regards // paul

Probir Gupta September 21, 2017 at 11:13 PM Deep impression of rainfall sounds on the wounds ... Touches of infinity in your brevity ... Paul Callus September 23, 2017 at 4:54 AM Impressed by your insightful feedback, Probir; thank you. Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu September 21, 2017 at 7:45 PM Let the rain be her tears. In time she will heal. Have a nice evening my friend. Paul Callus September 23, 2017 at 4:46 AM Very lovely comments, Darlene...thank you. Best regards // paul

Jan Allison September 21, 2017 at 6:39 PM Very sensitively penned, I can picture this scene so vividly in my minds eye Paul. I think this will do well for yo in the contest it is so moving:-) hugs jan xx Paul Callus September 23, 2017 at 4:45 AM Thank you, Jan, especially for the faith you show in it. Hugs // paul

Lynn Marie September 21, 2017 at 5:36 PM Haunting imagery, beautifully conveyed. Living in a rain forest, I appreciate and relate to the rain's hypnotic trance and glimmer of hope within the gloom. Superb writing Paul, a joy to read you:) a fave Paul Callus September 22, 2017 at 3:06 PM Thank you, Lynn; your comments are superb and poetically delivered:) ...the fav is much appreciated. Warm regards // paul Jan Allison September 21, 2017 at 6:37 PM what a lovely comment Lynn. Its so lovely to see you back I hope you will be posting again soon:-)hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands September 21, 2017 at 5:05 PM I can feel these words deeply. Well written! Good luck in the contest Paul. Paul Callus September 21, 2017 at 5:09 PM Thank you for your feedback, Heidi. Regards // paul