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Rain Drenched Hair

I stroll along the promenade as the sun up high shines bright in the sky The sea is sparkling with precious diamonds adorning an azure blue gown A gentle breeze begins to flow like your fingertips gently caressing my curls I close my eyes as I visualise a time your sweet fingers ran through my hair Teardrops cascading from above drench my hair with your feelings of despair There is no rain a tumbling down and the sun still shines bright in the sky, but I feel your hopelessness and despair on that fateful night when I was not there Now full of guilt I absorb your despair forever I live with rain drenched hair Written 4th April 2019 Contest Writing Challenge 1st April 2019 Its All About 8 Sponsor: Dear Heart 3rd place Contest: April 2019 Premier 8 Max 10 Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2019 6:47:00 AM

I have read your creative winning work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/25/2019 8:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara for your lovely comments, nice to see you with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Constance La France

Date: 4/23/2019 11:05:00 AM

Ann, congratulations on your win in my contest with this well done Elegy, I love what you did with Rain-Drenched Hair !

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/23/2019 2:26:00 PM

Thank you so much Constance I always enjoy the challenge of your contests and it is such a compliment that you loved my poem, thank you! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/9/2019 12:40:00 AM

Such imagery and beauty: "The sea is sparkling with precious diamonds adorning an azure blue gown A gentle breeze begins to flow like your fingertips gently caressing my curls" Wow!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/9/2019 1:03:00 AM

Many thanks for your lovely comments and continued support Caren, I love your visits, thank you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/5/2019 12:21:00 PM

A fine piece Ann, liked your scope of imagery and line of thought.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/6/2019 2:22:00 AM

Thank you so much Gordon for your lovely comment, good to hear from you and I hope you have a great weekend, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/4/2019 4:07:00 PM

A powerful poem full of emotions. Beautifully written. Well done Ann :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/4/2019 5:54:00 PM

Thank you so much Heidi for your wonderful comments, I really appreciate your support. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/4/2019 6:57:00 AM

Very romantic and touching verses creating a cascade of feelings that fill the heart dearest, Ann!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/4/2019 7:53:00 AM

Many thank yous Demetrios for your beautiful comment, with kindest thoughts Ann xx