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Rain Dance

On a crisp autumn afternoon, Much to my stunned delight, Storms clouds morph into monsoon With jagged spears of light And thunder cracks of doom. Dancing in the storm’s eye Fat raindrops bouncing all around Afraid I will soon die Trying hard not to drown So happy I could cry. After months of summer sun Rivers and streams almost dry Rain pounding like a drum No chance of blue sky Praying more rain will come.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 9/19/2015 8:42:00 AM
Missy, this ably displays great imagery, sensory and emotional description. Such deep appreciation of nature, her gifts and her wiles. Lovely! 7
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Date: 9/13/2015 2:20:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Very creative and descriptive lines..Sara
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Date: 9/13/2015 12:53:00 PM
- Here in Norway we have too much rain :))) - A great poem, well written !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/6/2015 10:17:00 AM
Super 7 and adding this gem to my fav list my friend!! Bravoooo!!!
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