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Rain and Rays

dripping rain, tapping on the glass, my eyes will follow, the winding paths, and in the end, a whole new race, of rolling drops, at their new pace, no control, in where they go, so rain can fall, and i wait for snow...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/1/2012 11:31:00 AM
JEZABELLA, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD
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Date: 8/30/2012 8:54:00 PM
oh I can wait for the snow. congratulations on your rhyme Jezabella. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/30/2012 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Jezabella. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2012 4:51:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading your poem tonight. Thank you for sharing it.
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