Rain

Water rises up,
laden the skies, clouded sight;
tears shower the soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 8:51 PM
rain and tears . They always make for good metaphors of each other, Hija
Fraser Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 3:31 PM
I love the rain Hija, and your fine Haiku reminds why I do, James :)
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July 10, 2014 at 11:42 AM
Hija, it's a good feeling poem, love it..Linda
De La Luna Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 9:31 AM
Thanks for loving it, Linda! & thanks for stopping by.. :))
Mehta Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 9:56 PM
Nice images with nicely crafted haiku, hija
De La Luna Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 11:05 PM
Thank you, Dr. Ram! I treasure your words.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 3:47 PM
Beautifully written Haiku, my friend! Well done.
De La Luna Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 8:11 PM
Grateful here for your appreciation, Pandita! :)
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