Rain

Drops falling.
The tears of gods
Forgotten or forsaken
Tapping at windows
Begging for repentance
Those
Cruelly recalcitrant
To their design.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 1, 2012 at 11:28 AM
LUKASZ, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD
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August 30, 2012 at 8:51 PM
Well done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Lukasz. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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June 15, 2012 at 6:22 AM
nice write Lukasz
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