Rain

Oh! how i love the rain
to watch it's beauty
fall from above
like the tears of angels
washing away the scars of yesterday
it's always the same
TRUTHFUL
POETIC
STEADY

It can be gentle
like a first kiss
or angry, as a last goodbye
it never gets lonely
always consistant
DRIZZLING
POURING
POUNDING

What beauty!
those countless tears
awkwardly falling
from the face of a bashful sky
i love the rain
PURE
PASSIONATE
CLEAN
UNASSUMING...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 4:00:00 AM

Congratulations Kurt on your win in Dane Ann's contest "Zippedy Do Dah!". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2010 6:17:00 PM

Congrats Kurt on your big win in the Zippedy Do Dah contest.. an awesome piece my friend.. enjoy your sweet victory tonight with luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2010 6:50:00 AM

Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already Kurt. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 8/6/2010 7:13:00 AM

Many congratulations Kurt on your win in Carol's fine contest with this lovely poetry >> James

Amy Green

Date: 8/5/2010 11:56:00 PM

WOW! Like this work a lot. congrats on your win, I need to read some more stuff by you. Excellent.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/5/2010 5:33:00 PM

Congrats on this win, Kurt

John Freeman

Date: 8/5/2010 5:02:00 PM

Congratulations, Kurt on your success in the contest, Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/5/2010 1:40:00 PM

Congrats Kurt on your winning poem in Carol's contest ... wonderful words and win for u to enjoy today..with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/5/2010 1:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest Kurt. Love, Carol

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/23/2010 12:08:00 PM

This is excellent and flows well. It brings back sweet memory of the times I used to play in the rain as a child. The images are lovely and refreshing. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/23/2010 11:54:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kurt. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/23/2010 3:34:00 AM

Oh, the rain can be gentle like a first kiss. Nice expression.