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rain lashes fiercely— the sun breaks a silent hymn of light my breath catches drenched in awe

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Date: 12/11/2024 9:27:00 PM
Your Tanka suits so well to the image given. Lashing rain is the phenomenon we often experience now. Well composed.
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Date: 12/11/2024 1:03:00 PM
ohhh, love this one. It's one of the best written I have seen
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Date: 12/11/2024 12:39:00 PM
l love this, thank you for sharing. l cant write Tanka, i'm very envious of those that can. kind regards Jx
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Date: 12/11/2024 11:13:00 AM
Hello Jay, Merry Christmas. I would like to wat5ch a rain storm like that. Enjoy your day my frkiend. /Darlene/
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Date: 12/11/2024 10:25:00 AM
- Lovely written :) - hugs
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