Rain

The leaden gray blacking clouds 
Open up and drops me upon the earth. 
I fill the lakes and make the rivers run. 
I fall into the hustle and bustle of crowds
As they huddle under their umbrellas. 
My wet glistening drops tip-tap dance 
Quenching the thirst upon nature. 
I am cool as I fall on surfaces like rooftops. 
My rhythmic soothing sound 
Lulls even the savage beast to sleep.

3/23/2024

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 4/16/2024 10:18:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win with this delightful song of the rain in all of her glory! I do love the sound of rain on the roof at night! Blessings, dear friend, and Easter season joy to you!
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Date: 4/7/2024 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Rain" write. I love to hear the rain coming down... Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 4/5/2024 4:53:00 PM
Eve, wonderfully penned, I love to hear the rain at night on the rooftop, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 4/1/2024 6:47:00 AM
I guess for some contest if so, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 3/27/2024 2:52:00 PM
This is awesome, Eve. Rain seems to be the most popular one!
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Date: 3/25/2024 6:21:00 AM
A lively poem, with great rhythm. I love to hear the rain falling on the roofs. Hugs.
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Date: 3/23/2024 9:20:00 PM
Love this one Eve. Hope you are doing fine. I really like this a lot Eve I will make it a favorite. Thank you for sharing. Hugs.
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Date: 3/23/2024 7:20:00 AM
Much enjoyed this personification, Eve. A fabulous rhythm of rain adorns your poem.
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Date: 3/23/2024 6:40:00 AM
The rain's rhythm is a lullaby, Lovely write Eve
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Date: 3/23/2024 1:28:00 AM
A good description of the rain! A lovely poem. Well written.
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