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cobble stone alleys muted rivulets of hope a flash of lightning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/1/2023 4:51:00 PM
Dear John, I enjoyed the nuanced atmosphere of your stormy haiku. You captured summer rain in Boston with beautiful brevity and poetic finesse. "Cobble stone alleys" really sets the "muted" yet vivid mood. Congratulations for your wicked awesome win in Kim's contest! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/31/2023 7:22:00 PM
Beautiful illustration. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/31/2023 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement John - imagery gorgeous
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Date: 7/31/2023 10:53:00 AM
I enjoyed the imagery! Congratulations on your win in my contest, John!
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Date: 7/29/2023 8:05:00 PM
Aha! The lightbulb went on: ... exposing Liverpuddlians smoking dope...
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Date: 7/29/2023 4:07:00 PM
very cleverly penned John hugs jan xx
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