Rain

gray clouds darkness falls rain shower seeps into ground~ frogs croaking grass rise 8/16/2022 Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 9/26/2022 12:37:00 AM

The rain is so amazing. I love the rain. Lovely Haiku Eve. Congrats on your win <3 ~Anna Kaianah

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2022 1:38:00 PM

Congrats, Eve. YOu make it clear to imagine.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/24/2022 9:17:00 AM

That last line is a fabulous visual

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/22/2022 1:37:00 PM

Congratulations on this win. A wonderful tribute to "rain." I had some last night. It was really needed and was lovely to hear. Enjoy your win and day with blessings...........

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/22/2022 5:31:00 AM

Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!

Bill Baker

Date: 8/19/2022 5:28:00 PM

Nice Haiku, Eve. Good luck in the contest my friend! Bill

Constance La France

Date: 8/17/2022 3:28:00 PM

Eve, lovely haiku, best of luck in the contest. I used to live near a park with a pond and the creaking frogs were so loud at night, but I loved them ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2022 4:04:00 AM

I wonder if those frogs' croaks kept you awake. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing and visiting my page. I left a little note on your comment. Sara

Silpika Kalita

Date: 8/17/2022 3:22:00 AM

This haiku has ecological aesthetics, which is a joy to read... greetings Silpika

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/17/2022 1:26:00 AM

Lovely haiku. Soon we'll see many of them. Hugs.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/16/2022 10:59:00 PM

Hello Eve, haven't been here in ages, and cant drop in without reading a poem from you! Lovely!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/16/2022 6:50:00 PM

Ain't nature wonderful my friend, hope your keeping well, the summer is slipping away so quickly, much love to you xo

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/16/2022 12:14:00 PM

Lovely haiku Eve. love phyl

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/16/2022 8:32:00 AM

Love the image Eve, after our heatwave here in the uk I'm ready for some rain to cool the air. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/16/2022 8:21:00 AM

Grumbling because of summer heat, rest assured I'll grumble again when it rains. Lovely haiku. Hugs.