Rain

gray clouds darkness falls
rain shower seeps into ground~
frogs croaking grass rise

8/16/2022


Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Anna Marie Kaianah

September 26, 2022 at 12:37 AM

The rain is so amazing. I love the rain. Lovely Haiku Eve. Congrats on your win <3 ~Anna Kaianah

Andrea Dietrich

August 25, 2022 at 1:38 PM

Congrats, Eve. YOu make it clear to imagine.

Caren Krutsinger

August 24, 2022 at 9:17 AM

That last line is a fabulous visual

Paula Goldsmith

August 22, 2022 at 1:37 PM

Congratulations on this win. A wonderful tribute to "rain." I had some last night. It was really needed and was lovely to hear. Enjoy your win and day with blessings...........

Tania Kitchin

August 22, 2022 at 5:31 AM

Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!

Bill Baker

August 19, 2022 at 5:28 PM

Nice Haiku, Eve. Good luck in the contest my friend! Bill

Constance La France

August 17, 2022 at 3:28 PM

Eve, lovely haiku, best of luck in the contest. I used to live near a park with a pond and the creaking frogs were so loud at night, but I loved them ~

Sara Kendrick

August 17, 2022 at 4:04 AM

I wonder if those frogs' croaks kept you awake. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing and visiting my page. I left a little note on your comment. Sara