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Rain

Rivulets of water
run down my windows. I
rush outside so I can
rescue my washing. Its
ruined! I’m extremely
riled as they had forecast
rays of bright warm sunshine

6 syllables per line – how many syllables

Sponsored by Kim Merryman

04/14/21

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2021

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/13/2021 3:51:00 PM Hello JAN,I am glad this poem won. Hugs Login to Reply

Mv Venkataraman Date: 5/9/2021 10:14:00 PM Remedy given by rain is really great as this rendezvous is made by God and roots find to create a route to receive rain or else they are by drought routed. Login to Reply

Josefina Costales Date: 4/26/2021 3:47:00 PM *Huh* I commiserate with you on having washing let out to dry to come back and find it wet (forecast not good). Nonetheless I enjoyed the write. Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 4/22/2021 4:46:00 PM A big CONGRATS on your win, Jan! Janice Login to Reply

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 4/20/2021 8:56:00 PM Superb and spellbound the writing on Rs through 6 syllabic form Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/20/2021 3:49:00 AM Congratulations on having this clever and cute Pleiades honored for POTD Jan. Concise and brilliant writing my friend! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 4/20/2021 12:39:00 AM Back here with congrats on your win dear Jan. God bless. Have a lovely day.. Hugs.. ~ Ani Login to Reply

Juliet Ligon Date: 4/19/2021 10:35:00 PM Back with congratulations and a thank you for your soupmail to me. Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 4/19/2021 8:37:00 PM Dear Jan, your clever pen flows with "riled" yet sweet ink in this creative piece. I adore the emotion that rides your imagery so smoothly. I love the video clip of Eruption covering "I Can't Stand The Rain" .. and I remember and loved the original recording of the song by Ann Peebles in 1973.. wow! so long ago, it seems unreal! Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Marilene Evans Date: 4/19/2021 6:32:00 PM Hello! The weatherman always missed...LOL... Congrats! Well written. Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 4/19/2021 2:58:00 PM Jan, a wonderful, creative pleiades. I like how you told a story to portray your title and added a little humor, too! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/19/2021 5:09:00 PM Thanks for your lovely comment and another super contest challenge:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/19/2021 11:45:00 AM Back with "Congratulations" on your win. I love the rain and this write. Have a blessed day............... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/19/2021 5:08:00 PM thanks so much Paula:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier Date: 4/18/2021 2:59:00 PM Congrats on your POTD, Jan ~ well done Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2021 5:10:00 PM Thanks so much for your comment Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar Date: 4/18/2021 7:27:00 AM My apologies for missing this POTD. I missing too many things these days. Hugs. Victor Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2021 5:09:00 PM Thanks Victor i find it hard to keep up too:-( hugs Jan xx

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 4/17/2021 1:37:00 PM Congrats on POTD Jan!! nice one! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2021 5:09:00 PM Thanks so much Krish:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 4/17/2021 6:38:00 AM Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2021 5:09:00 PM Thanks so much for your comment Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael Date: 4/17/2021 6:25:00 AM The weather forecast is like the lottery anyway...Well done. Congratulations Jan Allison on POTD. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2021 5:07:00 PM Thanks so much Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie Date: 4/16/2021 10:36:00 PM Hello Jan ... what is so funny here is. You believed the weather bureau - thanks Jan - Lindsay Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2021 5:04:00 PM Rather fictional but i do recall Michael Fish doing a forecast and denying there was a hurricane lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Fenn Date: 4/16/2021 10:06:00 PM Great Pleiades, great R words! Congrats on your POTD! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2021 5:03:00 PM Thanks so much for your comment Jennifer:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll Date: 4/16/2021 4:49:00 PM Jan, wonderful poem . Congratulations on POTD, Sunny wishes~ Warren Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2021 4:59:00 PM Thanks so much for your comment Warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin Date: 4/16/2021 3:50:00 PM Awesome Jan! Congratulations on potd!! Great job Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2021 4:58:00 PM Thanks Mark it lifted my spirits and made a difficult day bearable (with our friend's funeral) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 4/16/2021 12:16:00 PM Congratulations on POTD, my friend. I wanted to write about the rain also , but didn't know the use of "r" words . Hugs Eve Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2021 4:57:00 PM Thanks so much for your comment Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May Date: 4/16/2021 11:56:00 AM Congrats on POTD Jan, we had the same idea! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2021 4:57:00 PM Thanks so much Joseph i have seen several poems on rain/ rainbows:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France Date: 4/16/2021 11:43:00 AM Jan, fun and wonderfully penned Pleiades Verse, and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with it, love _Constance Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2021 4:56:00 PM Thanks so much for your congratulations Constance:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile Date: 4/16/2021 11:33:00 AM Congratulations Jan xxoo Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2021 4:55:00 PM Thanks so much Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

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