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RAIN

Rivulets of water run down my windows. I rush outside so I can rescue my washing. Its ruined! I’m extremely riled as they had forecast rays of bright warm sunshine 6 syllables per line – how many syllables Sponsored by Kim Merryman 04/14/21

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Date: 5/13/2021 3:51:00 PM
Hello JAN,I am glad this poem won. Hugs
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Date: 5/12/2021 10:00:00 PM
Missed this one. Belated Conrats... Pangie xx
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Date: 5/9/2021 10:14:00 PM
Remedy given by rain is really great as this rendezvous is made by God and roots find to create a route to receive rain or else they are by drought routed.
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Date: 4/26/2021 3:47:00 PM
*Huh* I commiserate with you on having washing let out to dry to come back and find it wet (forecast not good). Nonetheless I enjoyed the write.
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Date: 4/22/2021 4:46:00 PM
A big CONGRATS on your win, Jan! Janice
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Date: 4/20/2021 8:56:00 PM
Superb and spellbound the writing on Rs through 6 syllabic form
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Date: 4/20/2021 3:49:00 AM
Congratulations on having this clever and cute Pleiades honored for POTD Jan. Concise and brilliant writing my friend! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/20/2021 12:39:00 AM
Back here with congrats on your win dear Jan. God bless. Have a lovely day.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 4/19/2021 10:35:00 PM
Back with congratulations and a thank you for your soupmail to me.
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Date: 4/19/2021 8:37:00 PM
Dear Jan, your clever pen flows with "riled" yet sweet ink in this creative piece. I adore the emotion that rides your imagery so smoothly. I love the video clip of Eruption covering "I Can't Stand The Rain" .. and I remember and loved the original recording of the song by Ann Peebles in 1973.. wow! so long ago, it seems unreal! Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/19/2021 6:32:00 PM
Hello! The weatherman always missed...LOL... Congrats! Well written.
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Date: 4/19/2021 2:58:00 PM
Jan, a wonderful, creative pleiades. I like how you told a story to portray your title and added a little humor, too! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/19/2021 5:09:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment and another super contest challenge:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/19/2021 11:45:00 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on your win. I love the rain and this write. Have a blessed day...............
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/19/2021 5:08:00 PM
thanks so much Paula:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/18/2021 2:59:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD, Jan ~ well done
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/18/2021 5:10:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comment Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/18/2021 7:27:00 AM
My apologies for missing this POTD. I missing too many things these days. Hugs. Victor
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Date: 4/18/2021 5:09:00 PM
Thanks Victor i find it hard to keep up too:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/17/2021 1:37:00 PM
Congrats on POTD Jan!! nice one!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/18/2021 5:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Krish:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/17/2021 6:38:00 AM
Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/18/2021 5:09:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comment Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/17/2021 6:25:00 AM
The weather forecast is like the lottery anyway...Well done. Congratulations Jan Allison on POTD.
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Date: 4/18/2021 5:07:00 PM
Thanks so much Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 10:36:00 PM
Hello Jan ... what is so funny here is. You believed the weather bureau - thanks Jan - Lindsay
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/18/2021 5:04:00 PM
Rather fictional but i do recall Michael Fish doing a forecast and denying there was a hurricane lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 10:06:00 PM
Great Pleiades, great R words! Congrats on your POTD!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/18/2021 5:03:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comment Jennifer:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 4:49:00 PM
Jan, wonderful poem . Congratulations on POTD, Sunny wishes~ Warren
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/18/2021 4:59:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comment Warren:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 3:50:00 PM
Awesome Jan! Congratulations on potd!! Great job
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/18/2021 4:58:00 PM
Thanks Mark it lifted my spirits and made a difficult day bearable (with our friend's funeral) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, my friend. I wanted to write about the rain also , but didn't know the use of "r" words . Hugs Eve
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/18/2021 4:57:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comment Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 11:56:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Jan, we had the same idea!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/18/2021 4:57:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph i have seen several poems on rain/ rainbows:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 11:43:00 AM
Jan, fun and wonderfully penned Pleiades Verse, and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with it, love _Constance
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/18/2021 4:56:00 PM
Thanks so much for your congratulations Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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