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rain-spattered waters

rain-splattered waters
	burbles in rising river ~
		beaver trims rudder

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/2/2023 7:20:00 AM

Beavers are clever, cute and somewhat cunning and this is eloquently explained in your imagination driven Haiku - well penned my friend. Let a predator come near their nest on the dam they have sectioned off and they will become one furious, aggressive opponent. Love to watch animal documentaries. hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/5/2023 7:05:00 AM

Hi Jennifer. Nice to see you :) i appreciate your thoughtful comments! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/31/2023 8:20:00 AM

Dear Linda, I am enchanted by your lovely imagery. A splendid haiku full of movement and life! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/31/2023 1:19:00 PM

Hello sweet Susan. Your comments are always so positive and encouraging. Thank you! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2023 1:24:00 PM

I think you did very well writing this haiku.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/30/2023 1:50:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. I'm always learning, with each word, each poem. :)

Clifford Villalon

Date: 8/29/2023 7:27:00 PM

Rain dances on surface waters with your poetry, Miss Linda! hi hi Cliff

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/30/2023 6:02:00 AM

Hello Cliff. Sp nice to see you! Thank you for reading my poetry and commenting. Your comments make me smile. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/29/2023 11:25:00 AM

very descriptive indeed:-) hugs Jan xx

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/29/2023 2:19:00 PM

Hi Jan. Always a pleasure. Thanks and hugs! :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/29/2023 10:11:00 AM

Laf your imagination is terrific. You say in 9 words what would take me to say in half a page. This conjures the scene then adds the players so we might see them at work Simply the best ...like you ! Best wishes from Svvie.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/29/2023 2:19:00 PM

Hi my friend Svvie! So happy to see you! I'm glad the images were brought to life for you. Thanks for stopping by! :)