Railroaded

I wish you well In your brand hew house Are the trains very loud? Questionku Contest Richard Lamoureaux October 17, 2015

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/7/2017 8:46:00 AM

Thank you, Patricia: Questionku's are fun. You should try one.

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/7/2017 8:24:00 AM

Oh well I don't know whether to laugh or cry. Poor souls living near trains it depends on how near. WE were just far enough to mae it vey nostalgic. I love trains at a distance, Well written it contains just that hint of sarcasm.

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/26/2015 1:19:00 AM

Ha! Terrific. Made me smile, thanks for that. Well done Ralph, regards, Viv

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/25/2015 5:57:00 PM

Hi Andrea: Thank you. but I was surprised to see so many stanzas and I only had one and they were great!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2015 5:26:00 PM

I still think you said so much with this one Ku. I really liked it. Congrats.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/25/2015 4:34:00 PM

back again with congratulations, Ralph! a most merited win. // paul

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/25/2015 4:01:00 PM

Thanks ,Richard: Now I know what Questionku is.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/25/2015 1:27:00 PM

This is a fun one! Congrats and thanks for entering my contest,

Michael Tor

Date: 10/25/2015 12:26:00 PM

Nice win Ralph!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2015 7:58:00 PM

oh, cute!!! Not a good place to live then!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/18/2015 11:15:00 AM

Hi Paul: Thank you for you for sharing. I enjoyed your kids sense of hearing. Even sight. My 4 year old grandson is always reminding me to turn off the bathroom light!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/17/2015 10:00:00 PM

Great write great message so few words say alot.

Ralph Sergi
Date: 10/18/2015 11:07:00 AM

Thank you, Miichael for your comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/17/2015 8:29:00 PM

let the buyer beware I guess lol - made me smile I can hear the whistle of the steam train from my house but not the trains themselves:-) hugs jan xx

Ralph Sergi
Date: 10/18/2015 11:16:00 AM

Thank you, Jan. Homeowners are always the butt of railroad junctions

Paul Callus

Date: 10/17/2015 6:19:00 PM

I can relate to this one, Ralph. Once I was in England and I stayed in a house right next to the railway lines; the place trembled most of the time and I wondered how long it would take before it came falling down. Enjoyable write:) // paul